Cute_Romansa
Good story, it has a lot of future for tasty, just please do not speed up the echos too much and everything will be fine It is easy to read and the protagonist is easy to understand 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
How the prick has this Fanfic so many 4-5 star reviews... I mean it is unreadable the grammar is simply trash not even google translate is as bad as this... I don´t mind the FF has no " " but I just don´t understand how some people continue to read this story... Author-sama you definitly need an editor
This is an H novel, so of course it would have a lowish score. Except I scored it low because it is unreadable. It feels like I am trying to decipher some ancient text. Also the pov's change from first to third and it is hard to tell if they are talking or thinking. If that doesn't bother you then give it a go.