NineLife
Writing Quality is acceptable, a few missing comma and a little gramatical error, there are rough sentences, but can still be understand if you read twice... Stability Updates is great, almost everyday, chapters are released. Story Development good, introducing the problem and Protagonist in Ch1, looking back at the past in Ch2, seems good to me Character Design is good, though a bit used, it's new in the Post Apocalyptic world(I think) World Background has been introduce in the first chapters.. Please change your plot, make it more attractive. Good Work BTW.
As I myself have been a fan of invasion story, where humanity would fight zombies, aliens and the likes, I find this one worth a read. Writing quality 5/5: I find things that might be great if improved Stability of Updates 5/5. Story Development 5/5: Since it jumped from another world and some other time, Might I expect flashbacks? Character Design 5/5. World background: is it definitely beyond earth!
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