Reviews of Gray Rogue

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me likey .

The style shows promising qualities while being a bit jumpy and chopped - for the lack of a better word - and especially in the beginning, the blatancy in the way we learn about the MC seems a bit forced and unnatural. However, the pacing is good, even though the general natural feel of the narration is lacking.

It's a grat isakai story! My favorite tropes! And I love the balance between emotional scenes and funny ones that feel natural, instead of being out of place. The pacing is good so far and I love the family dynamic of the MC with his new parents. It kind of reminded me of an anime I saw, in a good way! Kerp up the good work author san!

Why does he have to be a servent?? The story would have been so cool if he were a normal person. Let me guess, Luka is going to be a servent for the rest of his life and in the end the dukes girl and he are going to be in love and end up together….

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Has the world building of a good YA novel incredibly interesting characters whose personalities are very well blended I think from a psychological perspective but I think some of that may be on accident. Very enjoyable

Very interesting and surprising story, it might be good for the author to take more time to polish some parts, but overall it is a great read.