So, I'm doing it! The shameless author review! I don't think my fanfiction is the best or will be the best as I'm still figuring things out, but I believe that it will be one of the greatest! I'm a proud disciple of the Harem Sect and will enjoy writing my MC getting with some of the most memorable gals of DC whether they be villains or heroes. So, come down and strap yourself in for the long ride! Thank you for the support so far!
I like the story overall but can the MC stop being a fucking idiot simp you travel to the DC universe with the inheritance of a golden dragon and you ***** and moan for 8 months he clearly know the DC universe is very dangerous and the first thing you do is tell Batman your identity then take a bullet for Harley even though he barely knows how to use his power at all it's just fucking stupid
People give 5 stars to everything without explanation, so don't bother about 3 stars. The stories are interesting but the MC the central axis of it is annoying, irritating, stupid, lazy, stupid, loudmouth, did I say stupid? Because it's stupid. I don't understand the authors' fetish lately of making the MC a complete garbage ... The rest is fine ... I think.
The start was a little shacky. might just be me not understanding how the main character could wallow away for so long. also not really a fan of those types of stories, read enough of them in spacebattles. the rest however is coming along nicely. could We get a chart of the main characters abilities? Cultivation novels tend to go of the Railes.
See all the rage around this fan-fic? That's the beta males with no redeeming quality in their lives. The types who think they're hot shit only to be failures. A NEET reincarnates, broken and introverted personality, and this community expects a man with balls of steels in the first chap? They keep on ridiculing the MC who thinks with his lower-half while they're only reading it for the R-18 tag. Anyways, the character personality is almost on-point and the grammar is decent too, better then half the fan-fics in this site where the MCs who get women like they're Pokemon.
One of the only few novels I have ever read that actually make a Harem work. most of the time when I see the Harem Tag for a novel I drop it because, to me, authors who are lazy and don't want to actually try developing as writers, go the Harem route. This author though does a good job of keeping the development of ALL the characters involved, although the process of adding of Harem members is questionable, but once they are in, it is Golden. Keep up the good work, and I hope you keep updating.
Now that I have read even the current chapters, which is chapter 60, I can give my review, my opinion is that the author is doing a very good job, Mc (Ethan) had some thoughts at the beginning when he wanted to be a hero but abandoned the idea and that was good, he's more like a guy who does what he wants without things like Hero, villain, anti Hero, and has his harem that is developing in a fluid and good way, about Mc's strength, he is strong but for now only at the level of Superman out there, strong but not enough to face possible threats, the good that is growing (I highly recommend this fanfic)
Great. At first i wasn't going to read this because i thought the mc was going to tell everyone his secrets because of a review but, *SLIGHT SPOILER*he told batman he was from another world not dimension. Batman thinks he's an alien. The story turned out great though and I'm ready for more. Harem:Ivy,Harley,Raven,Alisia and someone else who isn't averse to killing(Diana maybe,but that ship might have sunk).