Reviews of Gold Demon

Think man, just think before u write. U have micheal, one of the strongest beings in dxd and second highest ranked person in Christianity. And he has a wife who us accepted by god. God of all people accepted his angels wife, this is relevant cause of fallen angels, even more so since micheal is a seraphim. This chick would be proected by everthing. My ass she'd get raped. Ficitiom is fiction, but pls think a little

The background set for the story in chapter 1 makes no sense at all. If GOD had accepted the relationship between who is essentially his right-hand/son he would make sure that she was safe. The fact that a weak devil who Michael could one-shot got the chance to rape his human lover is stupid. Not gonna waste my time on a story when I need to question the Authors logic in the first chapter.

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good keep up all the good work and don't focus on people who write mean comments as long as you think your writing is good it's bound to attract people who lik