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this is another one of those novels that uses forced plot to to push a certain narrative,and in this case it is bad.since this is a fanfiction.. why bother to reincarnate him into gregory family,.if you are just gonna have them become indifferent to him, especially rias, makes zero sense since in the world of dxd this is one of the clans that puts family first especially rias.. so he the author has forced olot for what? a cool back story for when he gets revenge or face slaps them? because he is to lazy or cannot right decent interpersonal relationships ? and if that is the case why not just reincarnate him into literally any other clan? it is silly and forced... another author who cannot even bother to stick true to the original content.. change the plot as much as you want but if you change the personalities without reason than that is just bad writing.
Mc is a smart Idiot that is somewhat naive but also jaded? He seems to be okay with abuse against him and is basically a doormat to his family. He is also 10 soβ¦ the story is okay but the format is weird af. hope author donβt delete this because They needs some criticism. Mc is also very plastic in his design and there are so many Plotholes. the mc is a walking one. good lUck
I expect too much with this fanfic, because this fanfic is ranked in the top 10. I was curious and read it and stopped at chapter 17, social interactions are very awkward like children's writing, and the reason MC is being ostracized by his family is something I don't understand and it's too ridiculous, there is another fanfic that deserves a better rating than this fanfic!
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This would be the true definition of an AU, because the characters here do not share anything with their original versions either their attitude or morality. The only thing they have in common would be their names and the description of their appearance. Ignoring that, the story seems interesting if somewhat messy in some respects.
the mc isn't even trying . its so generic and boring . yes he doesn't have the powers but atleast make something that will give him powers or something that will enable him to take sacred gears or something . news flash genius!! mc is in the story already . gremorys are acting different . plot has already change . so why don't you take out that rod out of your bottom and write something good or just stop writing this piece of garbage
Mc is a reincarnated. I just hope he uses his memories from other animes to create items from other universes, since he brought this concept, do it in a way that Great Red doesn't notice. I don't think he would mind if some cards got over his dimension due to his size, the magic cards from fate illya prism 3rei anime be good. and when you change the appearance of the protagonist's maid, post a photo of her and the protagonist as well, because so far I don't know what he looks like. this fanfiction needs a cover,
Why is this story so high in the rankings? I read the first 5 chapters and it is nothing special. Escrito con traductor de Google [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]