TimVic
Have liked this story since the start but waited till now to see if it keeps up to its promising start. So far this has been one of the best novels, if not the best, on webnovel I have read in a long while. MC's character so far is one of the highlights of this novel who has a great mix of dominance and reasonableness. Another highlight is that the "revenge" starts being served since the start of the story even though the antagonist is at the "highest level" and readers don't have to wait thousand or more chapters for it to even start. The pacing of the story, world background and to top it all, the anticipation built so far, are all fantastic. Overall highly recommended. One doubt I have is how the story is going to be developed beyond the completion of revenge (which should not take very long going by the pace of the story) because MC was already at the highest levels of cultivation. There is a tiny indication about that but one can consider it as part of the anticipation built so far. Hopefully the story will not end at the revenge.
This is my first work so don't expect it to be as great as my second work Β» The Bloodline System I was still inexperienced when writing this so the quality and style might not be to your liking. Just don't get your hopes too high. I feel more confident in my second work so you can decide to check that out if you do not enjoy this one.
So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done. Try my novel #Rise of Evil Sword God tag;- R-18,harem,action,romance, Xianxia
Alusec is an mc who is always a step ahead even after getting weakened. He made some stupid decisions due to anger and pain. A lot of people decided to drop the novel at that point. None of them understands what it means to be betrayed by the very person who is most dear to you. Anyways let's continue with the review, Alusec still uses the mistakes to his advantage and pulls a big one on the current god king. The same student who betrayed him. That's called being smart and Alusec doesn't lack that. I'll just advice you to read to the latest chapter. For those saying there's no solid world background. Read more before judging. The author doesn't like to info dump so a lot of information is released slowly. After all my yapping those that will read will read. It's an amazing novel and it's worth your time.
Come on this author deserves a round of applause for bringing a new genre to the table. we haven't seen this kind of plot that offers something new on webnovel ever before. From what the author said, he's still a newbie to the writing world, yet he's as good as this which means there's still more room for improvement. This novel is only two months old which means this author is two months old in the writing world. Right now his description and writing style surpasses a lot of books on webnovel that are up the rankings so this one definitely deserves your vote. This book is worth your time.
This book is a solid eh. Theres no real depth to it, no charecter development, no solid world building. Just kinda throws an whole bunch of names and titles at you. The author attempts to create emotional moments but it fails spectacularly because of how shallow the story is. Only good to read for power trip fulfillment. If u expect anything else then not worth it.
Writing Quality: fine. Stability of Updates: okay. Story Development: Okay at start, but gets worse as time goes on. mc recovers some strength, lose it 2 - 3 chapters later cause someone over half a milion years old is too emotionaly unstable. Character Design: bad, all characters have no motivation what so ever for what they do and most of the feel like a bunch of 15 - 20 year olds who still don't know what the word being calm and clear minded means. I mean, it kinda breaks the imersion when a bunch of gods who lived for hundreds of thousands of years acts like some naive teenager who havn't seen the world. World Background: ok, nothing special. Would like more descriptions surrounding the world, so we know how it looks like. Comment: sorry for the rant. Think the novel has potential and was overall okay. Hope it will improve.
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