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Important note before starting

There was an overall agreement that the events were too fast and rushed. So, after taking the opinions of some, I will rewrite this in a new novel under the same name. So if you are a new reader or already read some chapters, I advice you to wait for the second one.

When I do it, I won't post until book 1 is at an end, with a chapter each day. Also, I will let some trusted people read it before posting to see if there are any problems.

I already know of all the criticisms, so if you want to comment, do so and put a way to make further improvements.

You can still contact with the other through Discord: https://discord.gg/qJ8DDTa

If you want to read this edition, I won't stop you, but there will be one better I hope.

Awada141

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