God of One Piece

Trash Novel. No emotion portrayed. Flat and blatant writing. Waste of time. Not recommended. If author re-writes shall see. SORRY.SORRY Trash Novel. No emotion portrayed. Flat and blatant writing. Waste of time. Not recommended. If author re-writes shall see. SORRY.SORRY

the entyre f.ucking story is around this sentence ''I will do my best to protect the ones i love.'' if u f,uking want to protect them then remove the fucking goverment. easy f.cuking peasy this sh1t is drop like a heart beat , havent read any other persons work and emphasis they are getting strong to protect them , this novel is about th1s sh1t in every fu,king chapter. Get ur sh1t author and make a story not a f,uking complaining fiction. Story started out good, but it become sh1t afther.

The plot ad storynlinewas interesting, especially how his crew didnt take Luffy's canon characters. Bad side though was everything is too unrealistic and bland. Like MC super cold doesnt talk but cries when he accepts them? Plus why is he taking so much?

Trash writing extremely confusing and difficult to read Trash writing extremely confusing and difficult to read Trash writing extremely confusing and difficult to read Trash writing extremely confusing and difficult to read Trash writing extremely confusing and difficult to read

At the beginning it had potential , now ? IT IS SHIT NOW ! THE MC IS A LITTLE GIRL ON HER PERIOD 24/7 . DUDE SORRY AUTHOR BUT JUST DROPP THIS NOVEL ALREADY

Story is alright, I love the one piece world and love the development but there are some part that are not to my taste and that is how mc got 2 new crew mate during the beginning, from his personality so far, he’s not the type of guy to spare them but he did, this part is just one of the thing I dislike, but I have not went that far into the story so I do not know if it will happen again or not. You can chose to read this or not from what I just said above. Also for some people that ask why do you dislike new crew mate. I don’t dislike it, it’s just how he got them

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Mc op but not too much op. And its harem here! Add more members! Story pace is so fast. Please dont add too many your original characters in story. Just use all characters in one piece. And i always thought pluton is a canon or laser beam or something, but its your story.

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2 star for writing quality.. author can improve in his writing quality more,, aside from that updates are a little bit slow but the story development and the character design for the MC is really good.. more practice is needed for the writing but overall the story is quite good!

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The plot is a but too bland and depressing. The character development is little to none, unstable character traits such as MC is both emo and crys for going shopping. Overall the story is a bit too dark.

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Much better than I thought it would be. I like the fact the mc decided to go on his own and gets his own crew rather than being an extra on Luffy's. I am also a fan of Op Mc's that are not ridiculous.