Keith_Brice
It’s really bad. I like the idea but it’s extremely rushed and skims over the entire story. Also the world building is terrible. Nobody has been born with healing magic before, and light magic is super rare, but no one seems to care. Also it talks about how he kills a level 2 rat one day and struggles, but then the next day he somehow kills a lvl 20 rat that is apparently impossible to kill, despite it stating that the village chief was a good enough adventurer to get rewarded his own land? Hope you come back and redo this, I really liked the premise.