Reviews of Glacio Drogon Adventurers

Hello everyone, Thought I would introduce myself and gain some support :D I’m DaoistDragonSteal and this is the very first novel I have written after a lot of going back and forth about writing a novel. I’m hoping to learn as much as I can on this writing journey as I improve myself and write a story which everyone can enjoy. I hope everyone can join me in this adventure and support me on this journey and guide me.

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

So far I have read, the way the story is moving, the plot is getting developed is good but the story is very wordy which makes it less interesting. Simple situations are described or presented with many words which I believe should not be needed. Work on it and giving good review because this is your first story. Keep up the work and get better!!!