Gilgamesh in MHA

Look it's readable, especially compared to a lot of these harem filled multiverse hopping ever 10 chapters stories you know? However it has a lot of problems it seems like the author didn't know they were going to integrate fate into the story at the beginning or something leading to humongous exposition dumps later on which can be a real turn off. Like why is he explaining all this stuff to class 1-A? Momo I get since they're engaged she should be filled in on these kinds of important family matters, but like everyone else? Author you should try to integrate things more seamlessly into the world you're trying to build rather then just telling us. "Show don't tell" is a saying for a reason afterall. (By the way is it just me or are their like literally no periods used as full stops in this story? Cause like that's kinda gross on the eyes, please fix that.) Writing Quality- 2 (No periods/poor grammar) Stability of Updates- 2 (Seems relatively consistent but at the same time not really.) Story Development- 3 (You do actually move your story at a passable pace when not dropping exposition dumps.) Character Design- 3 (You seem to have gotten at least more than half of the characters right so good job.) World Background- 2 (While you do have a lot of world background, kinda, you dilute it with exposition dumps. What I mean is that the world feels less natural then it could. I also think this because you never explain why more people don't know what going on with the fate side of the world.) Even though I gave it a 2.4 it's out of appreciation for what this story has the potential to be as it has truly grown on me. Good luck author, I hope to see you in the next update.

Writing quality is trash, cant really understand much due to it so i have no idea what to give story, character, and world but it seems like the updates are pretty stable. 0/10 dont reccomend until the author edits the chapters, wouldnt even be hard as almost every paragraph has a comment with a grammatically correct version and at this point it seems like the author just doesnt care...

you should really change the title as the world is a fusion between mha and fate series, low quality writing and the plot progression in the later chapters is extremely forced, is it to make up for the lack of content??, info dumps everywhere and it's getting annoying, gilgamesh's character doesn't exist at all he just says gilgamesh's lines from fate conclusion:fix the grammar,, explain how the fate stuff work here at mha like does magecraft work here or how does one go to the throne of heroes like can all might go there and should his one for all be his noble phantasm??, also change the title cause it's incorrect a proper title for this would be Reborn in fate/mha crossover with gilgamesh's power

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I can’t get past the horrible grammar I tried really multiple times I just couldn’t get through it I’m really interested in it but can’t get through it

This story is the definition of so bad its good. Like, the only part of the mc that is like gil is that he walks around calling people mongrels. That is his entire personality. The characters are all boring and barely represent their canon selves. Dont even get me started on the writing and grammar. That said, still moderatly enjoyable

IDK but after reading chapter 2 I'm really disappointed and the first chapter was already bad but chapter 2( ￣へ￣) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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tried to get over the grammer but couldn't and also the character development just sucks....................................................

Title is a lie should be called power of gilgamesh in mha not gilgamesh in mha if i was going read some random person with the power of gilgamesh i wouldn't be here as there are many better stories out there. I was expecting gilgamesh with his weapons and personality and i was met with suck disappointment also the author just had to CLICK BAIT. When i read the story it's so bad don't waste time and author shouldn't CLICK BAIT and get better grammer and don't do overpowered in mha when the goal is to defeat one person from the story line, take a look at overpowered ofical novel which are good and compare it

It was okay in the beginning, but got worse as time went on. Also don't read this as it is currently, it is undergoing a rewrite. So don't have an opinion on this story for how it is currently, but wait until the rewrite is out.

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the thing about this fanfic I not only is the grammar terrible but like so many people he wants to make the story more realistic and give the mc more of a challenge but that ruins it for me cuz Gilgamesh is mean to be op with no equal except plot armor but like always there is suddenly another character that is so much stronger than the mc and it isn't even correct Angelica is not stronger than Gilgamesh the only reason she was a problem was because of her spell that let's stuff pass through her without that emiya could have easily beat her Gilgamesh didn't need that and he lost against emiya is because of plot armor

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The writing is on a level close to a xianxa novel and the story development is bad as there's alot of time skips. For a person like me who has read countless Xianxia novels the writing ain't so bad.

Dude reading this really hurts mY brain their are so many easy fixes and so lme hugh mistakes too

Honestly unreadable with the grammar, you spend more time trying to figure out what the author is saying than reading the story, I had to stop after the first chapter. It's a shame, I quite liked the concept of the story.