Reviews of Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love
Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love
KhanQi
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Dear readers, this is my new novel. This new novel will cater to both male and female readers. If you want to see MC change from weak to strong and finally become immortal, do not hesitate to collect it. If you want to see MC and heroine have a vigorous love, do not hesitate to collect it.
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As of writing this review, I’ve only read up to Chapter 16. The author’s writing style could use improvements, especially when it comes to tenses, grammar and phrasing. From the chapters I’ve read so far, I keep getting the feel that there is a lack of direction for the plot and details with respect to world/setting. Sometimes it seems to me the MC was just running around places and doing things, being silly, asking questions that aren’t getting solid answers and evaded by other characters. This all makes it hard to grasp what’s going on with the plot/character development. Mystery is good for a story but when reading this, I felt there was too much strange mystery happening and not enough answers as a reader. Or perhaps it’s the way the MC is narrating the story that doesn’t really resonate with me. In fact, I kind of find the MC annoying with his dealings. I have to admit that this isn’t really my cup of tea. However, if you are into magical realism, creatures of the night with hints of romance in the background then this story may be for you.
The story is fast paced and has the potential to shine as the author further dwells into the happenings. Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't take away from the overall sentence structures and is a good read. There area few horror scenes that are not my cup of tea but then am a faint-hearted person. Expect more quality work from the author.
absolute ****, immensely retarded mc, beta to the point he wont even ask any questions if some one beats him to death, does opposite things of what others says and gets into trouble, no power levels information from author, actually so little information that mc feels more retarded than he already is, and even if hes weak as **** he'll try to go to somewhere to face last boss. all in all ****ed up mc, if you can tolerate this, you should read this novel
The story is fast paced but not rushed, have a unique start different from other novel out there. Besides from bad grammar this novel has a lot potential in it. The character development is pretty good like how the mc adapt with the situation is not same, he will learn from mistakes. The romance is a bit rushed but pretty decent.
After reading some other reviews and the author's own words I forced myself to read to chapter 21 before dropping it. The writing/grammar is kinda meh, but the storytelling is pretty good, the first person style of writing is really not my cup of anything and I just find it annoying. The characters are kinda meh so far. The male lead is your typical perverted shounen harem lead. As for how he will find a lifetime love while he is constantly thinking of boning every girl he meets, I have no clue, either way I feel bad for her already.
Genre is Paranormal. Have yet to touch on the romance bit but author says there is one. Anyway, this is a novel that takes a lot of getting used to. English isn't my first language, and I suspect it isn't Author's one as well. It's not the grammatical errors that get to me but rather, it's the way that the Author phrases things. The structure of the sentences takes a lot of getting used to, and one would need to decipher what is truly being said. I guess that gives it the more 'paranormal' bit more paranormal. /heh I find the characters extremely likeable and I love the way the story unfolds as to his development. The pace is very slow and full of 'you will know later' which, quite frankly, is quite irritating after a while. I wonder why the MC hasn't freaked out yet each time someone says it to him. He's a much better and stronger person than I'll ever be - and I'm talking about character wise, not physical strength. I mean, come one. He's in the middle of the greatest plot EVER and no one tells him anything yet he doesn't throw a tantrum. Whoa. Anyway, I do love the story and what twists and turns it holds. If you have the patience to adapt to the Author's writing style, you won't be disappointed in reading on. It gets much better (storywise and plot) as you read more chapters. All the best, Author!
