Reviews of Ghost Rider Through the Multiverse
Ghost Rider Through the Multiverse
PassiveAtom5140
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
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Writing Quality: (4/5) Easy to read with little to no issue with the writing structure itself. Not perfect but still leagues ahead of many other novels. Stability of Updates: (5/5) I started reading when there were already a nice selection of chapters available, so I didn't really run into any update issues. Story Development: (1/5) Honestly, just read the One Piece manga and you'll know exactly what happens. I read up to ch 18 and nothing significant changes in the story. I mean, the MC does do some things that SHOULD make a big impact buuuut... nothing. Character Design: (1/5) The only true OC character is the MC and he feels like any other MC from the mass of other generic fanfics. I get that some events take place that make you want to care about him, but he just feels very.... boring, bland, edge lord almost in a way. Point is it's difficult to truly take him serious after a point. World Background: (5/5) I feel this one is kind of a cheap/cheat five out of five. While the novel doesn't feel like it fails at any world background connecting stuff, it also doesn't feel like it goes out of its way to actually try either. Summary: This feels like any other generic One Piece fanfic out there. The only thing the novel does is add in the MC to the One Piece crew and have the surrounding cast react to the MC's abilities or fall in love with him; all whilst following the original One Piece story line. To be fair though, the author does state that this novel is a wish fulfillment piece of work. Good overall for a first step into writing a fanfic; you got great writing punctuation and clean writing, so work and build off of that. As far as your next novels (or the next world for the MC if you want to go that route), just be more creative and be more willing to expand beyond the pre-established narrative of the source material. Be more courageous with just throwing your MC out there or something like that. Anyways, good job on your novel so far but I'll be waiting till it improves somewhat.
That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses
It's a bit on the edgy side for me coupled with the fact that I hate harems this may be a little biased but here goes. The writing quality is good I'm pretty sure he is a native English speaker and I have seen no mistakes in his grammar and punctuation. His speed on updates is pretty slow and sporadic but considering he is doing this for fun that is expected. Story development is predictable and simple and doesn't show much thought but again is expected since he is doing this for fun. Character design is complex and shows they're thought process which most of the time is reasonable. World background this is a fanfic so I guess it's just the way they present the background of it which I am supposed to review which I would say he (I'm assuming the author is a he) does a pretty good job but I feel like you would have to have general knowledge about one piece to follow the story which you should if you are reading a fanfic about it. 3/5 Overall Review: Is a decent fanfic which shows despite him doing this for fun he does put in effort. I would say Character Design and Writing Quality are the highlights of the fanfic he does research to help us the readers understand the concepts he is trying to get across better and in my opinion is a talented writer despite that this is not my cup of tea still 166 thousand people read the things you type so this definitely pleases a wide range of people so keep doing and don't get discouraged as people are reading your work even if it doesn't feel like it. In case you don't want to read all that: Decent fanfic not my cup of tea.
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so far so good but please go ahead don't follow the MC too much and don't be too loud like he's an idiot who will save everyone, just like he is neutral but when there is evil in front of his eyes he will judge his "sins" and for the world, I suggest to animeverse first like DXD, OP, NARUTO, BLEACH, MHA, AGK or others after a while you get bored then you can change to games or movies like resident evil or god of war/percy jackson,oh and I hope the update is stable every 1-2 days.