North Night
No offense ha..sugestion lang tong akin na sana nilaliman mo yong mga tagalog words para kuha niya talaga yung pag ka historical fiction nong novel. Ok na sana yung unang mga words kaso sumonod yung "mountain villa" at "nag eecho" ide na mamawala yung mood ng reader na mag basa kasi tagalog siya pagkatapos mag iinsert ka ng english in a modern way (taglish). ok rin naman namay english kaso sana gina mo syang whole sentence ir half na lang para hindi sya cliffhanger... Sana wag kang magalit suggestion ko lang to kasi Black bellied miss is actually one of my most favorite novel thats why i want everyone to experience this novel in a best way they can read it if they are not comfortable to read english... So please hear my suggestion.