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Reviews of Gate of Immortality

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Jewama_Baby
Jewama_BabyLv2Jewama_Baby

I am curious to learn more about this world and the samsara emperor. Good job author, I support your work..More hearts and love from me eheheheπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

Everton_Mason
Everton_MasonLv3Everton_Mason

It's a normal story, if you're looking for the difference, and quality, it's not for you. Like all MC stories that come out of the land to enter the world of cultivation, our MC has the same aspects of any novel, unique physique, his own cultivation path, prevented from cultivating like everyone else, clearly the most time-consuming and clichΓ© of cultivation. difficult that overcomes several kingdoms above exists. Emotionally unstable, a little cowardly and ungrateful, but sometimes intelligent, that is, not to a definite aspect of personality and depth. In a story you either surpass it by quality or differential, because if it's more of the same, there are many out there with more elaborate and long chapters that show more depth. Investing in clichΓ© and maintaining average quality does not attract the desired attention.

sophia_121
sophia_121Lv3sophia_121

This novel is unique and interesting .. Characters are well designed and anyone can imagine the scenes while reading. Can't say about grammar as you know mineπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Will recommend this novel to others so that more and more people will read such a wonderful novel✨

noBiggie
noBiggieLv4noBiggie

wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.

moty
motyLv5moty

it's a bit cliche but it grows on you, mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

MysticAmy
MysticAmyLv5MysticAmy

Putting the grammatical errors and the mechanics aside, THIS IS A PRETTY GOOD PLOT! It made me realize that we indeed as writers, have different fortes! I couldn’t do anything like this! Keep it up, Shadow! I could really see potential!

Lian_Zhi
Lian_ZhiLv1Lian_Zhi

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M1s3ry
M1s3ryLv4M1s3ry

It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read. I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!

xImOllie
xImOllieLv3xImOllie

Please can we get day updates even if you go premium of 5 coin per chapter will still read updates..........................................

ArchbishopOfSloth
ArchbishopOfSlothLv4ArchbishopOfSloth

Probably one of the most disappointing Main characters in WN's history. I read until the end but I can't understand MC's character. Sometimes I wondered I read different stories. Too much cockblocking. Author's writing style very difficult to read at first . I am not telling about Grammar but about his style. He used a lot of ' jokes that are not funny '. Most of the tags are misleading and I am going to drop them because this is not my cup of tea.

zd4zaaa
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lovekakez_02
lovekakez_02Lv1lovekakez_02

I am not ino fantasy buttttt.... the word choice, the descriptive writing.... it has inspired me and yeesss, the suffering has inspired me too. Let the haters be damned and dab on they. I luv this book, ur creativity has sparked inspiration in this lil kake. U rock!!!

A_New_Dawn
A_New_DawnLv4A_New_Dawn

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Great_Reader
Great_ReaderLv2Great_Reader

Not bad but the update is slow. Here are some dots.....................................................γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚γ€‚ε™’ε™’δΏ„εœ‹θͺ’θͺ’θͺ’θͺ’θͺ’。。。

Hender
HenderLv7Hender

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Daoist_God_King
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leo_messi
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