Reviews of Gate of Immortality
Gate of Immortality
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It's a normal story, if you're looking for the difference, and quality, it's not for you. Like all MC stories that come out of the land to enter the world of cultivation, our MC has the same aspects of any novel, unique physique, his own cultivation path, prevented from cultivating like everyone else, clearly the most time-consuming and clichΓ© of cultivation. difficult that overcomes several kingdoms above exists. Emotionally unstable, a little cowardly and ungrateful, but sometimes intelligent, that is, not to a definite aspect of personality and depth. In a story you either surpass it by quality or differential, because if it's more of the same, there are many out there with more elaborate and long chapters that show more depth. Investing in clichΓ© and maintaining average quality does not attract the desired attention.
wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.
Probably one of the most disappointing Main characters in WN's history. I read until the end but I can't understand MC's character. Sometimes I wondered I read different stories. Too much cockblocking. Author's writing style very difficult to read at first . I am not telling about Grammar but about his style. He used a lot of ' jokes that are not funny '. Most of the tags are misleading and I am going to drop them because this is not my cup of tea.
The ****? The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously. The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.
Good novel depending on the circumstances you most likely didn't have a background check on cultivation. which I will do my best to summarize for you. rule No. 1 all cultivation is baseless without a weak body one of the fundamentals separating it from magic leaving me disatisfyed your realm list started with qi condensation making me wonder whether his sealed talents play the roll in helping him house something mystical like qi. No. 2 true cultivation is all about transcending limits on ONE'S OWN PATH anything other than this can rather be classified as a hobby so help in cultivation is meant to be minimal only pointing to the right way. Also making bloodlines a chortcut with an insurmountable dead end No. 3 Cultivation is truly based on the Dao heart if there is no elaborate passion towards the Dao then there should at least be a fetter for someone or something driving the devotion for the pursuit of the peak. I hope you have a look at my review to see if it helps to truly give this book more meaning a foundation if you will.
It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read. I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!
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