Lazy_leon
Writing this review with 41 ch read so take that into account. Where you ever frustated, that main character is waiting for power up at least 20 ch or more? Well based on what i read so far, this novel for you. I already fall in love with the whole power system, main character and even some side characters(which is very rare). I can´t say this confidently but so far, this is at the top when you are looking for tags as: game system, magic, frindship or bit of comedy :)
0-0 Listen to me......this novel is too good. >< Bro this novel makes you want to spend fast pass or coins. -_- Other novels make me sometimes yawn or go on other apps while I'm reading. This novel is was so good that I wasted more than one hundred fast passes and create 5 more accounts to get 15 faster passes daily. WHYYYYY DID THE AUTHOR MAKE THIS A PREMIUM NOVEL> I hate/love the author. Also, the author should post the original photo of the MC. Also, the author shouldn't make this a harem novel. I don't want to see the pure, innocent, naive child be a Casanova. (0)_(0)
Author supporting his work. In this novel, you will feel how life in a magical academy is. The world will be seen and felt with the eyes of the main protagonist. There are seven human lands, each with their unique storyline. There is Fighting magical beast, understanding the concept of "worlds", completing "dungeon", fending off the alien invaders, face slapping, and lastly, comprehensive magical " Technology" in the early chapter of this novel.
i would love to say great ending but it costs too much to just end in the middle of the book as a finished story if I'd have known i wouldn't have wasted my fp and credits on a fraction of a finished book good story bad writer for doing half a job even if its for pleasure its stiil paying you for premium
OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense. The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.
I am not someone who writes reviews for novels (since I'm really lazy, and I mostly like commenting on chapters), but I certainly have to give it to ya, I did not expect this novel to be such a twister. At first when I read the title, it felt like the typical VRMMO novels out there, but this one is a real twister. Now truthfully speaking this is my FIRST review, so I can't give the specifics, but all in all I must give this a 5-star just based on the World Background and Story Development, the chapters have some small grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too much to worry about since some people can fix those in the paragraph comments. Keep up the good work Author!! I will surely reserve at LEAST 1 power stone and 1 fast pass if it's the last thing I do!
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15 Chapters in and only one fight. The plot is slow but the characters are fleshed out well. The only reason why I am reading this novel even though the battle scene are so less is because of the unique personalities and features of the character. You got to add more battle scenes!!!!!! Or say goodbye to me, your loyal reader.