Auren02
Gotta have a good and capable Harem husband. Uzumaki has ridiculous vitality for all his girls and women. So many jaded, lonely, mistreated, neglected, mind screwed beauties in all these art imitating life universes left miserable from lack of exceptional men. Why leave so many girls unhappy? Living and getting ahead is much easier to do when your family is large and moving toward the common causes. First generation kingdoms can be amazing when it's the king, queens and the trusted people to build the kingdom, each doing their parts. Later generations cause problems and destroy what's built when they earn nothing because it's been all given.
Before I start I want to give a disclaimer that I have never held fan-fiction in a good light but having said that... I like this one. Truth be told, it is very obvious that some of the groundwork for the novel draws heavy inspiration from other anime, manga/manhwa, and light novels. Despite this fact, I believe that the writing is fairly decent and only seems to be improving further into the novel. The plot is simplistic yet satisfying and many characters remain truthful to their original portrayals. These are the simplest yet most vital reasons for why I like this fan-fiction above many others Iβve read. Above all else, I would like to address the author. The passion and care that is put into your work is felt by many people and you obviously have a certain level of ability for writing. Your willingness to take risks in your writing and incorporate some ideas that you have seen recommended in comments is actually a rather smart play that will hopefully continue to serve you well. I am certain that as long as you continue with such dedication towards your works that people will always recognize it and support you as you become a better author. Happy Reading Folks, The Monk IY
Well nice read overall just to past time. But as more chapters go.. i lost all the fun to read it. It's getting boring with how slow the story development is. Even i have to skip some chapters. It's really too slow, better if the author put some time skip here and there. I don't know if it's the author intention to highlight naruto emotional development, but i think it's just too much. Thanks for your work anyways.
This is by far the best naruto fan fiction Iβve ever read. If youβre unsure still check it out and you wonβt be disappointed. I feel like itβs a very realistic approach to how naruto should act and how he should have viewed the village in my opinion. Great work author and I hope you can continue this story soon ππ½
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