Reviews of Game of thrones: Three Wishes
Game of thrones: Three Wishes
Tristan175
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Terrible Everything in this thing makes me want to forget it, let's start with the grammar. The person writing this is probably not very used to english, but the real problem comes from a lack of punctuation, insertion of capital letters and confused lines. Backgroud Everything is messed up here and if you have an avarage iq you will understand, for first thing there is the trope of the mc becoming incredibly rich in tge early years of his life, let's gloss over the total lack of reaction from the people in general. What he does for gaining money is purifying water to sell... In middle ages where everyone drank water directly from the river no one would spend their money for water. Then Tywin Lannister, after being named some times, he totally vanish, could you imagine him as a total background character? Last problem (for what I read) for the world background is the total lack of information the writer has about the story he is doing a fanfic about (he thinks that Robert Baratheon was pratically already old when the mc and cercei are 10 or 13 I think, when in GoT they are about as old as him). With only this I strongly advise you against reading such a story (this is my first negative review, this is the first story written so bad that pushed me to write such things)
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-1 star grammar -1 star incest (pathetic simulation of resistance from MC -1star this makes no sens. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's a decent read but quite confusing on the whole. I think it's because too many concept are being blend together before prior concepts are firmly established in the mind. All in all, its a kingdom building fic where the kingdom and the people in it are practically worthless considering each battle is ultimately decided by 2 or more heroic spirit type heroes with all the firepower there of. For example, throwing a spear tends to anihalate most of the opponents army, etc etc. It kinda makes the whole battle worthless, along with the existence of soldiers and such... Which makes all the kingdom and army building aspects kinda useless...
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Made me want you to vomit legit was so cliche and boring and stupid I normally don’t get this triggered but for some reason this one really ticked me off and made me hate this so much I wanted to burn it in a fire this has everything that makes me hate novels and any weeb **** sorry author but this ain’t my scene dog I ain’t some weird ass creep ass weeb who thinks reading about little kids getting it on is hot alssooooo I think this whole merging thing just ruined everything I love about game of thrones and made it just another cliche world man
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