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To me it was a great story overall. :) š
one of better story.character development is also good.
This was such an awesome read and I wish I had found it much earlier than I did today
great story, I didn't want to finish reading, but, It was a good ending.
it was written well enough for me to consider it one of the best novel if not for the part where he keeps saying he is a dragon but he is not arrogant. in fact i consider him to patient and forgiving that he sound like a saint. it just didn't sit right with me especially if dooku was his master a sith. what kind of discipline over pride do you possess to not kill or torture someone who openly insults you infront of alot of people. just because you dont want to be seen a going mad doesn't mean you cant get angry or cruel. any way this is jist my personal opinion. other may find the mc's ways appropriate. that's about my only problem so i stopped at chapter 39. good luck
Great story and super fun to read hope you enjoy as much as I did
Love it some grammar corrections here or there but overall loved it.
Excellent book and good job completing it as most donāt. Worth the read for any fan
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this other than jon not finding a way to leave the planet and enter the galaxy a be a potential player in star wars, but this was always meant to be a just GoT ff with certain elements of SW. I really enjoyed it , the chapters were long so while there may have only been 74 chapters...compared to most stories, it would probably be double. I would say his ability to use the force to look into the past and future may be a little op but if you consider yoda could do it too within an instant then maybe not?
Great read. Can't say anything other than that.
He didnāt really do much his power carried him heavy. Everyone fell so easily he could Have made it more interesting bye making him conquer more lands n find new magic or somehting but I guess it was ok.
I loved it a relatively short but well-told story, a more than satisfactory experience ........................................................................
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it was an honor to read this masterpiece. This is one of the best GoT fanfics out there.
Fun to read, no huge plot holes that jumped out at me. Has full ending
One of the best GOT fanfics that I've read with an actual ending. With its own twist of bringing the force into in a modest way allowing Jon to use "magic" that dosent break the story.
Anyone know how much of the Maester/Bloodraven story lines are made up by the author? Iām far from a GOT superfan, but I donāt remember anything about those from the books or the show.
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