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Well i don't know how to write a riview,but here is my opinion on this novel i have read some chapters and honestly don't really like the mc because he's a fucking maniplutive ***** so i hope to see some change in mentaility in him and i hope he doesn't see women just as a tool for sex and actually develops some feeling for them and care about them..... Now you may ask why did i give a good review(4 stars) it's simple because i really like hs dxd fan fics and this novels story developing is gd honestly the only i see rightnow that is wrong is mc's menatlity which is obviuosly an arrogant prick....
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A good story where the MC isn't some pu*sy and will work hard to get what he wants regardless of the method. ...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,...,..........,
I liked it, I still do, but it started off pretty slow paced then suddenly jumped to 17 year olds in Kuoh where they're having sex xD I dont mind though still s pretty good story, but so many questions like what did the family do about his 'incredible' power he displayed from birth and magic control etc..
Great job, keep it up, because you have incredible talent and imagination. ππ» .................... .................... ..................... ..................... .................... ....................
A brilliant story and a good adaption of the highschool dxd universe. It keeps itself grounded to the actual story so i really like it. I hope he continues to develop this story further
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I was quite turned off by the story the minute the MC started to sass god shortly after dying. This just got reinforced the more I read and seeing how his harem comes to be and how he treats them finally made me drop this. This is 100% pure wishfullfilment and worryingly close to what Iβd consider a SI so lets just be happy that author has no authority or powers to exploit, seeing his view on women. While I do like a ruthless and evil MC, this has such poor execution that it leaves just a taste of disgust and disappointment in your mouth.
i have a feeling that the reason mc is bipolar is because the author write chapters after reading comments
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there should be more to this it's great.
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Thanks for everything author I will keep this in my heart for eternity thanks π
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Overall it's a good fanfiction but it would be better if MC had not killed his own parent's and ****ed them..............................................................................................................................................
I would rate this 22/100. Though I prefer a dominant alpha mc, this guy was just a asshole. The character acts bipolar. There wasn't any character building. I do not recommend.