Fnatic_Fan
The updating stability is actually not the best, but the rest? lol, giving this 5 stars in my opinion is being stingy the writing has a great narrative that describes not only how the characters feel and makes you invested in their problems, but also changes for the person the story's perspective is currently at, like, with the MC? the descriptions are more datailed, the sister's perspective? more about the feelings of the mc, the Mother's perspective? about the relations of his son with how he should be innocent, and how she tries to be a good mother for her children! i could go on and on, and i really believe that this novel should get more attention. But Yes, the first 3 chapters aren't that great, but later? the story just gets better and better lol
This is a fantastic read for ****** lovers. The main character is clever and while he does miss some things it is fairly believable. Even the tactics he uses to get his mother and sister to be with him tend to seem like they might work. This almost exclusively takes place in one village and almost always in the family home so we get only tiny snippets of world building, thankfully what we do get suggests a classic sword and magic world with elves being elves and humans being humans so it's easy to build an image in your mind. The four main characters all seem like they have a fair bit to them and obviously if this ever made it to the city arc we might have more side characters. Just keep in mind that this is likely the end. And even if the author writes more we might only get a few chapters or have long waits. If you can't stand unfinished works you might hate this but give it a shot anyways for the really good writing.
Mister author I want to sincerely say that this story is one of the best I've ever read, the quality of the writing, the development of the world as a whole and the MC himself is amazing. You managed to create so many things well done, the protagonist is "deep", his family is also great, although I would prefer him to have more sisters to relate to (mostly I wish there were sisters twins), but anyway this story is very satisfying for me , I can see great future development. The +18 scenes are also wonderful, the magic of the MC is interesting, I really like his sister and his mother and that's what I wanted to say partner, keep up the good work. Ps: I'm investing my Power Stones here, I just don't put them all, because there's another story that I also really like, but 1 out of 2 I put in your story. Ps2: you've probably considered adding "storage rings" but I don't remember seeing it in the story, so I'd like to know if there will be that because I think this tool is very interesting for the story. Thank you for your work and for started publishing chapters again (b^_^)b (I hope my text is understandable because I'm using a translator)