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At first i thought she was in a man body but after read it all she disguised by her father emperor and he know it that her daughter already gone and accept her and the characters also story line excited me😃😃 Keep a good work author 🤗🤗

This is really awesome... really op mc... great plot hope you wont drop this dear author coz im gonna cry and i will haunt you down hehe... to the readers out there if you like super op mc you should read this....

I'm very surprised this isn't a premium novel already. The quality in this novel beats the majority of the stories usually seen on Webnovel, even beating several translated novels. Magnificently written. Writing Quality The descriptions are some of the best I've read. At times, I thought that I was reading a fully published novel. The vividness of the world drew me in, everything is described with such vibrant colours. Rarely any grammar mistakes--the ones that I did see was probably just happy little accidents instead of things such as not knowing how to write dialogue correctly. I would recommend to maybe find a proofreader/editor to polish it up(but your quality is already brilliant so you can skip this. Just adding it for that little flair). However, I felt like certain descriptions were too over the top. They made the plot drag on, and literally everything was described in detail. Hence, it felt like a chapter went on forever. The dialogue felt a bit stiff at times, as if the character was slightly forced to say that line(a little hard to get what I mean, but do tell me if you don't understand). Descriptions are cool and all, but too much will bore your reader. Also, some of your spacing made it so my eyes skimmed parts of paragraphs(the bits that were clustered altogether). But that's not much of a worry. Stability I'm on mobile at the moment so I can't see the dates of when each chapter was updated, but from what I can see you have a very stable update. To be honest, I don't even know why this is a section added for original novels :/ An author should choose their own release times. Story development As far as the story goes, at the chapter I'm currently at, there's a base for what seems to be the major conflict for later on in the novel(and the conflict that leads to the ML, if I'm correct). Nice foreshadowing. I felt like some of the character development with each other was kind of quick? The thing with the Emperor(I'm trying to keep it as spoiler free as possible) was very sudden. I would've liked to see some build up, but you're already so far into the story. I'll continue reading, and write another review if I feel like anything's changed. As far as pacing goes, on the other hand, it's decent. Felt a bit slow due to all of the descriptions, but half of those had to do with world building. In the beginning of a novel, an author has to do three things: create characters, ensure plot, and effective world building(but you can only choose 2 of these things half the time lol). To be honest, I was getting a bit bored at around chapter 20. There wasn't really a draw for me, and I felt reading was a bit tedious. Why? Because there was no stakes. There was foreshadowing, but long-term. Until the most recent chapter I read(around 25-28) that really started getting the ******* up. You have my full attention now. Your view on vampire lore is very interesting. I don't know much about it, but it seems pretty cool. Another problem I have with the story development--you tell a lot of things. Some paragraphs felt like they were information dumps, and I found myself mentally skipping some of these. To combat this, split the info up and see if there's any ways you could show this information--it's okay if the reader doesn't know all of this. Go ahead with the story, us readers will slowly catch up along the way, joining the dots. Hint, but don't give. Much of the time, the reader doesn't want information dumps, they want the action. Character development Nine- cool, aloof, a bit sadistic, and very overpowered. I personally loved your depiction of her in the first few chapters, but after that it felt like she was just straight faced and aloof. Maybe it's just me. I don't really click with her; I feel like she is a little machine like. Also, she's very overpowered. You stated that she's trained to get there, and that it was hard, but I don't empathise with her at all. She's like a curious but aloof god looking.

This story is a diamond in the rough, it is very very good, the writing quality is superior to many other novels I have read on this site. There are very few, if any, grammatical mistakes, the sentences flow smoothly and they are very pleasant to read. The pace of the story is also very good. The plot is well thought out. I enjoy following Nine through her endeavors and travels, I really find it enjoyable to read this novel, and everything about it is catching my attention making it near impossible to stop reading. I would definitely suggest anyone to try out this novel, it is a buried treasure that deserves attention and a lot of love. It is worth it!

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Author, this was absolutely wonderful. I cannot. I actually cannot. This story is so wonderfully written. I was hooked from the very beginning. There is no doubt that I'm keeping this in my library and I hope that you update more. All the love to you and your work. Beautiful writing, brilliant characters, intricate plot. I'd love to be your disciple lmao (this is an actual serious application). Thank you author!!!

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I don't really review much because I suck at this. All I could say is, I have hundreds if not thousand (lels) of novels in my reading list (NU + WN + different apps) and out of those that were forgotten in a corner, I picked this one and binge read the whole night. It's that engaging. It's that good. And I'm supposed to be writing. Why isn't this more popular? Why doesn't it have a rating yet? This is an injustice towards a good novel! I recommend reading this especially to those who like genderbends. It's an added tidbit for an exciting romance. Yay! If you want a more detailed reason on why to read this, then go read the other reviews.

Great book so far im in love with it and its nice to have a badass female mc. Keep up the great work and thank you 😀😍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😍😍😍😍😍😍✌✌✌✌✌👍👍👍👍👍👍😸😸😸😸😸😸😸

READ THIS NOVEL. Seriously, the writing is top-notch, the MC is super cool. I normally only review after reading 20 chapters as I feel that is only fair. However, as I have been super busy lately and not able to read much, I did not want to delay writing a review for such a great novel. I love the way the author manages to bring the readers into the characters. The Chapters are wonderfully long and detailed, bringing to life the characters that are portrayed. You will fall in love with them. I'm only at Ch9 and already want Shade for myself. He's so adorable! Character and story development is fantastic. Can't wait to see what happens next and how MC grows.

I love this novel, the MC who is a girl disguised as a man. Once did everything for her love but she was misunderstood by him in which she closes her heart. Then comes nocturne who she lets in, it all fluffy scene lol. As well she likes to torture(pick) on her older brother.

I read this novel till chapter 10 and I must say it's really a good story! The story is written nicely and I like the mc >.< Going to keep this to my library and read the rest of the chapters!

What can I say? The story draws me in almost immediately and by the time the Crown Prince’s older brother is introduced and how she “handled “ him I’m all in. She is an OP female MC hiding her gender. One of the thing I like about this novel is that it didn’t go to the usual Royal scheme intrigues against their supposed useless Crown Prince. Thank god for that (cause admit it guys), I’m tired reading those. While in the very beginning it was introduced that she got herself a system but it didn’t ‘run’ her life per se. The story flows nicely, it didn’t feel force. With stable updates we can read the story without feeling mostly “who is this again?” Or “how’s this come to be?” The world building flows nicely. I don’t have a feeling “ugh block of text” when reading about the world the story takes place. It makes remembering the areas better. The writing quality is outstanding too. Characters, I like many of them! The novel soon becomes one of my daily read with such stable updates. Keep it up author. Love your story. Sincerely hope I could see the end of it. What more can I say? Go read it!

I love this novel so much. :') I hope to read more of this. Highly recommended to those that like reading gender bender and strong female AND vampires! Lots of love!!

If you've ever played an MMORPG and never wanted to leave it, then this is the novel for you! I dont have the words to express just how great the story is. I wish there were sequels or side-stories or something more. You want to watch these characters for the rest of their lives.

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This is amazing!!! I loved it! I was so hooked that it took me hours to read it! The description and background is vivid, the characters are so good. I have not read any story involving the secrecy of the gender of the main character, so it is very interesting to me! Great! Keep writing author! :)

Really good writing. I really love the way you potray everything, the picture is so vivid in mind. Great book, really love the MC. Can't wait to read more. Byee. Off to read some more.

Ah I fell for another novel... The writing quality of the novel is really appreciative (inner me: are hou able to write even half of it? Nah) The turn of events, the details of the scenes, ah it drove me along... The updates are quite in good shape too. The world background and its details are to the par I loved it very much. Keep it up author. Keep it coming cause I am glued.

Damn that's hell of a writing..The character description with the story is way too good...Hope to see it as a manga someday..my best wishes for you