Chrissaviolet
Interesting plot along with the awesome character! I predicted everything won't go that smooth in the later chapter for FL, because I smell a bit plot armor for her hehe... But... Please, avoid using emoji like that. You have a risk to get blacklisted. Also, you missed some punctuation. I need to re-reading the entire sentence to read it correctly. Overall is a nice story! Keep up the good work. You have a beautiful future ahead~
That was a quick and great read. I hope I can read more πππ First. I'd like to say that the author is really good at writing her story with details and it is easy for me to understand it. I like how mysterious the world that surrounds Eliana and the way it is also a fantasy novel. Hopefully, the author could update regularly since I'm starting to like it. πππππππ
I really love how the author describes the scenes in the story. You can observe that she's using the "show and not tell" technique in writing because of how detailed she writes. Overall I'm really excited on how the story develops and I'm also looking forward to every update hehe. I'm proud of you! Keep writing β₯οΈ
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