King Demigod
The greatest parts of blacksmithing/crafting stories is watching the character struggle, learn, gain experience, and finally succeeding in something amazing. It’s satisfying to watch that process of growth. This story doesn’t have that. He failed 1000 times to activate his system, then after it was activated, he didn’t struggle at all. Every sword was pretty much a success, with little info on what was going on. It seems as if everything is working out fine for him with little experience. Not that great of a read, and rather dull with basic drama.
Based off what ive read this novel is poor. i am only a few chapters in and the author seems to be in hurry to Push the plot forward. when he is smithing weapons he seems to pull the materials out of nowhere and his strength is at thus point advancing a whole level every chapter. seems like this author is just in a hurry to release chapters and not even checking to see if his writing is any decent. but im sire this novel will still get a high rating due the u godly amounts of reviews people seem to love to leave.
This book is huge gigantic work in progress; as the writer grow there will be things they will see and understand. but for now this book is horrible for people that need story context and structure oor just the basic power level info. I read up to chapter 17 before abandoning it. as a new writer this has showed me that context is always needed and not only action. I will have to review my work again before uploading.
The translation is good at all points. Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. And not to demotivate but that is likely the only good point. The plot is too flat there is nothing in the mix to make it better. And by flatness I mean as flat as this "._._._._._._._.". It's just; forge strong, forge strong, forge strong. It seems a bit too run of the mill. Also why has this been selected for voting?. There seems to be no apparent reason that would make it eye-catching enough to be put up for trial read.
I don't normally feel the need, but here I can't contain myself. So here goes: √ MC is dumb idiot, but I like the fact he's grinding to become stronger.😅 √ World Background non existent.🤞 √ Character around MC talks typically shit & either they are good or they are enemies. √ Story progress is way way too fast, MC don't even use his skills he learn & just keep learning new ( way to go boy )😹 √ MC's girl fall for him just coz she knows him (wat d heck)🙃 √ Idiot Mc don't care about money 💰 or weapons only his girl, which goes on mission & comes for a day to fu.c.k him. Btw Author didn't even mention the details. ahem ahem .😘 Good luck to those who are read this Charade of a LN, where such a potential story is ruined by author ✌️😆🤯
I dont care what the other readers say, if you don’t like it don’t make a review. If you actually read it and were like ‘It’s got some flaws but its decent’ and you put ut into a review i can respect that. If you say it’s boring then that’s your opinion, don’t drag the nivel down because it didn’t ‘click’ with you. In my opinion it’s a genuinely good novel and despite all the remarks going ‘boring novel’ ‘who even got this to be something we coted on’ or ‘how much do you guys think the author payed to have it up there’ shut up. This is a good novel and again, if you read it and pointed out some flaws you saw the I can respect that but if you just said boring then shut up.
How should I say it It's always the same pattern like first the MC got targeted, he defeat then ruthless plan from enemy then counter and defeat the whole clan. I'm also confused about the MC we don't know much about him just a reincarnator but that's all !! Wtf it's been +100 chapter and it's only a the beginning that he talked about it then after there's nothing, such joke... . I've also a problem with this stupid MC he can't even predict the plan of his enemy even though it's been 3 years he's in this world and he got bullied a lot bc of his trash skill at first no? But now right after he got his "Super amazing incredible system" he became arrogant and disdain other people even thought he really didn't do anything to get this power just grind and forge. Anyway back to the topic the protagonist doesn't learn much from his past experience and is still and always making bad decisions and don't make plan to prevent these accidents . He doesn't even train his technique to be stronger, the Chara dev is too messed up from my opinion there's so many problems that I could write a book with it.
This novel is a tragedy. No tension. Just a whole lot of sickening plot armour. It wouldn't be too bad if it was still entertaining, but this novel fails to engage the reader even the tiniest bit. No, what you instead get is a whole of confusion, less than satisfying 'fights' and cringey romance. You may however like this novel if this is your 1st, 2nd or even 3rd Chinese novel. Any more however? Heh, you're more likely to puke.
Well, I must say that the time I spent reading wasn't wasted at all, if this is supported and uploaded on Qidian despite having so many bad reviews one would think to make a novel himself since we're in a place where even the worse type of trash is used to farm gold. Don't be afraid even with your eyes close it can't be any worse than this. Give it a try.
The idea behind the story is quite intersting. If done properly I think this could be a great story. However the story pace is rushed and consequently everything is glossed over. There's barely any development and details in the characters, the world and the story in general. It's like watching a movie in fast forward. Good on the author for giving it a try, but this is a no for me .
Well the start was good I thought it will get better as the story progresses but I just can't understand the logic behind why the MC always have to be passive in a conflict. Some people sent assassins in his house and he just starts forging again and even if he confronts them and he has power to kill all of them but still leave them be after killing some people so that they can gather forces to oppose him.
I only read the free chapters. The crafting system is absurd, the protagonist just gets strong too easily, and his motivations are not clear. He doesn't have much thought to those he says are important to him. He is basically there to only deliver cheap faceslaps. Strife is done only by prejudice, even when the MC gains fame. The more interesting character is the apprentice, as he actually has some difficulties. Grammar is a bit off putting if that is your thing. the cultivation system is not explained, and everything is amazing. Didn't find this worth my stones.
The novel is worth 0.5 stars. Sadly, I can't review if I don't give at least 1 star. The characters , world and logic are trash in this novel in my humble opinion. From the others review, people seems to think like me. I really wish that the novel selected were chosen based on their quality and number of views and not based on how much each author will pay for it to be translated