Jiang_YingYue
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
I read the whole thing today. And to tell you the truth I wasn't really expecting much and just thought that this will be a quick reading break from another novel But behold the damn author made me change my words the story is lighthearted then tearjerking and again lighthearted. I was literally wailing and cursing the author in the middle. I then read on painfully until it again become the light-hearted romance it was supposed to be. I was delighted to see that all the chapters were long. Even though this is just 13 chapters it felt like 30 instead. I loved this.
Finished reading. Okay, this was a pretty good, fun, quick read. A thing to note is that its pacing and writing is kind of like a fairytale's, as if someone is telling the story orally, so it's not a super detailed and elaborate story. But before you read! Please note that this story is a HE, but the very last chapter is BE. The last chapter, since it's part of the extras, is probably just optional. If you don't want your heart broken, just don't read the last chapter and save yourself from the grief... otherwise, this story is fun... and sweet... and definitely not sad......
Aside from the last chapter. Not really sure what that was all about, but it was an extra so forgivable I guess. The main story was a sweet and innocent folk game love about a prince on a hunt for a princess and, well, kind of becomes the princess. The grammar is so so, but it suits the tone of voice to the narrative and time period. The story line is solid and compelling with a lot of thought into the tasks. An enjoyable BL overall.
Ok, so I don’t want to say too much. I really like where this is headed. The beginning is a little rushed, but I suspect the author wanted to rush to the main plot, and it’s still good even with the rush. I do recommend to at least try it out; if I turns out not to be your cup of tea, then don’t bash the author :)