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This is a new story, however I like the direction that the author is taking hence the 5 for story development. The quality is good but she needs to be consistent and clear in terms of defining power levels, cultivation and growth in this area. Hopefully this story gets more readers and updated more frequently. Good job author, take care and please continue telling your story. This novel will remain in my library for now.
I do like this story concept. There are a few points that need to be made clearer however, I think this author is either really young or doesnβt speak English fluently. The FL is a little young and objectified quite regularly. I know that during certain periods of history and in certain cultures young brides are common, but 14 is too young IMO. Maybe bump her age up to 16 or even 18.
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