Reviews of Finally, I am a Pure Mage (LitRPG Fiction)

Hi guys. This is my first novel, and as the author, of course I'll rate my novel five stars. I would appreciate comments and reviews as to how I can improve my writing quality, as well as suggestions. I would also appreciate it if you supported me by donating power stones if you enjoyed my novel. I'll try to update on a regular schedule, but I haven't figured one out yet. So it seems that for now, I'll be going with the flow. If you enjoyed my novel, then please help spread the word, because it's kinda hard to attract attention as a new author and first time writer. Thanks :D

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.