Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Don't me mind the stars. This is the review after we reached the last volume. This novel itself for its own story is too bad. My character pacing was too bad, the world background wasn't explained, updates were not stable, story development was way off the mark. As for the writing quality, don't even get started on that one. But actually, I got a pretty damn good idea and this idea is going to save this novel. I have started a series 'Eternal Series', I've got the idea for five stories including this, while a total number of stories will be eight. Fighting For Eternity is going to be the first and the last story for this series. This story holds much more than a casual story. It holds the idea, spoilers, and background for other stories. So I suggest reading it if you like the first hundred free chapters. My second book 'Magic and Martial War God' and the third book 'Eternal Faith' follow a different yet connected story with Fighting For Eternity. So you can read the free chapters on all three stories and then finally decide whether to read it nor not. Of course, If you don't read one of these novels while not reading the previous one, it doesn't matter. You just need to enjoy and if you can't find enjoyment, drop it.
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Whoa! Really a unique style of writing, I must say, this is my first time reading this kind of fantasy genre and it was super intriguing. The way you describe the scenes are lit and yes, even the plot itself is interesting. I would recommend this book to all Fantasy lovers! Enjoy, and thank you Author!
The plot is a bit unique as most cultivation novels with a heaven defying protagonist don't have transmigration in it as well. But I haven't seen much reference to the transmigration aspect in the initial chapters, as in character doesn't behave like a 21 century person, he's very used to the new world. There are several noticible grammatical errors. I'm not sure if that is due to lack of skill or just due to rushed writing, because the author updates very often. The general writing is a bit off in some parts, not sure if it is intentional
World of cultivation, influential victim sickly and our main character got a proceeding in his pain. He got conformity and many other efficacious resources. This little dangerous since many characters are given so many sources from start but if the author explains it well then it will be a conforming novel.
A fantasy novel isn't my strongest genre, but I like this one. The synopsis is intriguing and can attract readers who are into fantasy. However, I recommend the author to explain well those that needed an in-depth explanation for the sake of those who don't understand the terms used in the novel, besides Webnovel has readers all over the world. A few mistakes, but it's a good book. Keep it up, mate.
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