justin_Limnardy
The story is too good and its have a nice plot and I like the concept of the story looking forward to reading more chapters from you and thanks
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first review!!! still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!