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Father?

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NaztheWolf
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Now this story looks very interesting, I love the cover and the description, they both got my attention. Cant wait to read it, I could probably find some inspiration in here.

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PARASSHARMA7274
PARASSHARMA7274Lv1PARASSHARMA7274

The 1st chapter is amazing. There are some creepy scenes which makes it better. But I think that the ending could have been more better than it is now. I like this book and I am waiting for more updates.

ClumsyPandaStudios
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Luckyloulou
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That power off scene was great. And half of there family died in the fire that's tragic! I like how you are going with the story if you keep doing you than you will get to the top one day!!

Kathie_Kav
Kathie_KavLv2Kathie_Kav

The story and plot are really great and the character development is admirable too. I am now attracted to this book and hope the author good luck! 👍

bjalex
bjalexLv1bjalex

I really like this book,it has a great plot but I feel like the author should have included chapter 1 in the sypnosis instead of posting it as an own chapter.Other than that Good job author!

The_Procrastinator
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Nicole_99
Nicole_99Lv12Nicole_99

A lovely way of phrasing and use of language. I find this a thrilling read. We get to really imagine the scene as the story unfolds. The author is very invested in description so there isn't much to nitpick about in terms of description as the whole point of thriller and horror is to be able to imagine the scene that is going on in the story.

D_Marvel_2943
D_Marvel_2943Lv2D_Marvel_2943

I love the way the author portrayed is thought, using POV style of writing. Nice storyline, plot and development. The suspense was spectacular. Nice link up with each chapters. Best thriller-horror novel I've read so far. Thumbs up to the author.

_inkheart_13
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I normally do not read horror cause it kind of scares me but I actually enjoyed reading your book, Yeah some parts were really creepy but an okay creepy the type I can handle and in a way it sort of intrigues me. Good job author

raima_alam
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WorldEnder
WorldEnderLv1WorldEnder

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Catherineajuruchi
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Im a fan of horror movies and I must say the first chapter of this book is quite creepy😊..I' can't wait to see how it all goes. Thank you so much Author successor 😊😊

hivivianed_2948
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KaGen
KaGenLv10KaGen

I like the horror ones and this product is a good candidate for it. I liked the illustrations and story flow. congratulations to the writer.

WorldEnder
WorldEnderLv1WorldEnder

I liked the characters, they feel human not like robots in the majority of novels, the thrill is on point when I started reading it captivated me

Kenlinvert_Z
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qiujiu068
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Aaliyah_Stark_
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OH MY GOD !!! this is soooo great. It every thrilling and compelling. The way the plot is developing is nice and even the way the synopsis is written itself makes the reader want to go through the chapter carefully. Do update regularly, you're so natural.

Jacket_Josh
Jacket_JoshLv1Jacket_Josh

Interesting story so far! I'm about 10 chapters in and it's quite a ride. The horror aspect really shines in creepy spine shivering scenes, and the plots and characters are interesting thus far! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_darkLv4Dawn_in_dark

Wahooo..it is horror & thriller. My favorite one. Obviously I liked it. I'll surely surely recommend to read this novel for sure. Keep it up dear author. I loved it. Keep writing and updating.