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Reviews of Fated in Another World (Dropped)

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Fated in Another World (Dropped)

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Jovin_Gabiana
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First off, good base plot line ,character development seems a bit odd considering you had your stats boosted a bit with the blessings and unique skills but not gonna blame you on that since it's pretty stable Second ,the writing needs a bit of work like spacing the paragraphs and stuff but if you are going for the diary like style it doesn't really matter. Over all its interesting and fun!you did great on this one considering its your first one bruv.proud of ya

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