It was interesting reading this book. The writing is very accurate and well thought thru, I also really enjoyed the way that characters were written. I could easily imagine their personalities. Thou, I suggest for your next stories to try and describe character appearances more. Otherwise, very enjoyable book to read even thou I wouldn't normally read this kind of genre. Good work author!
I like it. The beginning if the story was something that pulls readers to continue reading, and the scene paints a very beautiful portrait. I especially love how the story begun with Destiny loving autumn and looking at the world with a very nice view. There was something about it that somehow hides a lot of conundrum, and I hope you continue writing. -Lemoné