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Fate or Destiny? Which One Is It!?
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Fate or Destiny? Which One Is It!?

Ayaka_Scarlett

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What is Fate or Destiny? Which One Is It!?

Read Fate or Destiny? Which One Is It!? fanfiction written by the author Ayaka_Scarlett on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is others fanfic stories, covering romance, comedy, arrangedmarriage. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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One very good and sunny morning, I went to school with high spirits. Waking up early in the morning, getting ready, bidding my parents a goodbye, going to school, chatting with friends and listening to some lectures. Yup, everything was very normal. I am enjoying my youthful life without a care in the world. But I never knew what awaits me at home that changed my life into something different back then. Huh? Does meeting him a good thing, or a really really bad thing?

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SunScar9
SunScar9Lv4SunScar9

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veinglory
veingloryLv4veinglory

The stories have strong emotional motivation and are coherently written. But it is obvious we are getting only a small piece of a larger picture.

GrumpyNeighbor
GrumpyNeighborLv4GrumpyNeighbor

The collection of short stories had a lot of variety. I just wished the chapters were longer and more focused not just on the verbal exchange but also on nonverbal cues to understand a character better. Do take the time to go over the chapters again --it's easier to catch errors with fresh eyes. Asking someone to help you out would also be great :)

StenDuring
StenDuringLv5StenDuring

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PeachyPearl
PeachyPearlLv4PeachyPearl

Never thought a story could also be well written in parts... I really liked it so far (chap 7)... Those little things that matter... This was the only phrase I could think to describe this lovely novel or should I say this amazingly written bunch of stories. Keep it up author. Keep giving us some break from those long and too deep novels.

Asphant
AsphantLv4Asphant

Each story is unique and has a kind of interesting vibe to it. However, at least proofread a chapter before publishing it. Some conversations are a bit forced and it was a bit painful to read it. The character design needs work, put in a few paragraphs as to why that particular character answered 'that way'. Let's take chapter 1 as an example, where the boy was asking his mother what he forgot today. When the mother answered, the boy was suddenly disappointed, what? Tell us why he was disappointed. Indeed, there are some times where the author purposely leaves out detail and throws it up to the reader's imagination. BUT, that scenario wasn't really appropriate for that. Was the boy disappointed because his mother forgot to curse the f*ck out of his soul that day? Obviously no, but you get the idea. Also, try to recognize and clear out those obvious grammar mistakes. It will take some time though. Ignore the low rating, it is actually a pretty good rating in my case. Keep writing.

Sapphirechelsea237
Sapphirechelsea237Lv4Sapphirechelsea237

The concept is great! It's unique in a good way. Though the length of the chapters is really short. If there is some more content it would be great! Keep writing! :)

WoolfWrites
WoolfWritesLv3WoolfWrites

pretty good so far I would like if you could write the stories more longer tho but still it's a heads up and I liked it hehehehehehe goodluxk

PsyberRose
PsyberRoseLv6PsyberRose

This is, literally, a collection of short stories or one-shots. This is the first time I've come across such a compilation and the concept is nice. However, I found that each story was a bit too short for my own personal taste. It's as if, once it seems to have developed a bit, it ends. Again, I stress: this is my own personal taste. There's basically nothing really wrong with the stories (the concepts are good). If you're the type that likes really short stories, then this is the one for you. I wish you all the best, Author! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°

MyCharacterLeads
MyCharacterLeadsLv5MyCharacterLeads

Truly a short story. Felt like a summary of may novels out there... I just can't move on to the man who killed himself. (I can't think a rational reason to accept it) haha I just advise to keep pace with the updates.. (you choose the date) Great job!

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