Reviews of Fate's False Servant

I really have to give it to the author for converting a tragic story into a heartwarming one(so far atleast). The character interactions, their goals, ideals are all introduced and explained upon beautifully. The MC is pretty awesome too, atleast he doesn't act like a immature virgin who just wants to get into others pants but genuinely loves the other person and cares for her. Although, there's a lack of action scenes but it's a nice change of pace from all the generic troupes. I recommend anyone who stumbles upon this to give it a try.

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I'm writing this review because it was already long due and also in hopes that the author will continue this story. Before I'm starting my review, please forgive me for that English is not my strongest language. Now the most disappointed one, the update. I'm sure that the author have his/her reasons for the sudden hiatus but I'm still going to 'rant' about it in the end. From what I remember from the first time I read this novel, the update rate was good when suddenly there were 'holes' in the updates. It started again with the author releasing 2 non-chapters about his plans for update but alas, after the 2 non-chapters the author only release 2 chaps before his sudden hiatus again. Honestly, I'm quite mad, but mostly disappointed because the author already developed the characters perfectly where he suddenly dropped a cliff and no update in sight for a month. I just hoped that he can write this novel again, at least until fate/zero is finished. Though I would like to see fate/apocrypha, with this kind of situation I'm not really expecting it. Writing quality can be said one of -if not- the best compared to other fanfics in here. Well, the first chapters barely have any spacing but it got better in the end. The story was kind of slow for me, though for this type of character development, it was needed. So I'm not really complaining about that. I really don't have any comments for character development except for AWESOME. The same could be said for the world background. Overall, this novel is almost perfect if not for the sudden hiatus. I still want to rant about updates but adding more will just make me look like I'm a hater. If the author read this, know that I thank you for your hard work writing this novel. If you decide to drop this, do tell us. Though it's sad to see a good novel being dropped by the author (already trending for some novels here), I hope you will have the motivation to write another novel. P.S.: I'm still going to keep this in my library though soooo... yeah.

As expected of an Asshole author.. You keep saying there is a 2nd arc then you stop updating chapters?? And TBH this is so annoying to read. All romance no actions at all. Haixt boring. Delete this please so it won't show 👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓

Beautiful writing, with actual detailed romance and progressive conversations, not just ryker having a girl thrown to him like other fanfics would proceed to have, although he needs to give Ria a baby since iris is a mother

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This is best fate fanfic. Hope this isnt dropped.................................. . %............................................ A........................ . ....

A very good fan-fic novel, try reading it, the only problem of this novel is the chapters please release more. The story is great even though there are still no fight scene because the story has just begun but you will like the bonding of the character of the story and the romance is not force.

Good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

this is a very good book please continue to post more chapters in the future. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

this is great fanfic novel i read need more chapter Please. :) .......................................................................................

this is a very good novel. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Honestly i have not been this satisfied reading something in a long time. Your build up to the serious fights that's about to happen is amazing. Turning the tragic life of the Einzbern family into a heartwarming family story for at least a little while before things get down is just great. I can enjoy the happy life they are having while anticipating whats about to happen when the war happens. Keep up the good work.

Gives me a reason to smile while reading. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Zero action mostly romance amazing writing while keep in library and check it every so often for action then delete this for 5 star review Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash

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