A story with wish fulfilment and a harem. not a big one but a harem. Bryan Best gets a system and rises to the top. It is the journey which I am trying to show or maybe the fun he had along the journey. Note: the previous version was discarded by me because it was the first time I was writing a novel and I couldn't make it Bryan centric. The MC had become an NPC in the novel which is why I redid the entire thing. Ending remarks - No NTR in any way. I mean no lesbian ntr too. Just to be clear. Bryan will be a playboy and might **** chicks outside his harem those won't be added to the main harem. may not even show up in the story later. I don't want to restrict myself here so making it clear beforehand. The story had strong sexual themes and may trigger people so reader discretion advised.
J'aime vraiment le travail de cette auteur il na pas abandonné et a reconnu c'est erreur pour recommencer son histoire, beaucoup était contre personnellement moi aussi mais en regardant sa nouvelle histoire si bien travaillé que j'ai commencé à le soutenir sur patreon, donc merci à lui pour son travail et sa sortie régulière je recommande fortement cette histoire !!!! 👍🐼🐼🐼🐼
This is indeed just the start and I might update after some time, but as of now, it is not so good. The start felt too rushed. Honestly, the previous novel from this author had a much much better start and I would have given it a 5. This modified one just seems too easy and rushed. No system should be that easy IMO.
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I like this one ...it's the best fresh one out here.... Nd pls have a request keep the reality in the like u r doin now...it's fine to that mc have power nd stuff but keep it like real nd most likely logical... Nd one suggestion to I would like since u have started a new from the start which is way better than old one ..so in this new don't just focus on one girl like I see in every novel now n then in heram which is that there's always a girl which important than other in mc eyes...which is disturbing...so pls don't make that mistake nd let the girls be unique without pointing to any importance...give the reasonable screening to every girl ...beacuse there are so many examples in every novel I read that authers just forget abt some girls nd most of them are the milfs one like 35+ ones they got in relation have *** nd after that they just won't mention them or just metion them at rendomly ...it's annoying seriously..so pls if u can don't do that... don't skip the some daily life moment with them...cause then it will feel realistic...