Great story! I like it so much ;) The idea is intriguing, the characters also. It looks that you already have a concept for the story,
Good job!
I am waiting for more :)
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A nice and interesting read. Not gonna lie, I want to see more chapters. I'll lurk and strike when more chappies are out. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Good start! The storyline is interesting, characters expressive. You wrote nice despritions. No grammar or stylistic errors! Well done!
Good luck with your story!