UrizenVergil
I highly suggest you do a quick Rewrite of the other chapters, so to make them more fluid, and to correct some writing errors that you might have missed. Overall it's not bad but also not a great FF either, it's just Mildly average I guess?, I sincerely apologize if I offended you in any way with my review. have a great evening... bye ^-^/
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