queenk091
GUYS!! I am the author of this Story but this is my reading account so it won’t tell you that..anyway yes my story has a lot of plotholes and yep it probably will seem rushed to a lot of you but this is my first time writting a story like this so if you could read with an open mind that would be appreciated. Also i am only 15 and started writting this at 13 so please don’t criticize me too hard😅 I am trying my best to write this that’s wIthin My capabilities😅. thank you for atleast trying to read it tho GUys!!! It may not be the best and probably has a lot of mistakes but i will try to fix thEm as much as i can!! Thank you fir taking your time to read this review!
hey no worries I am a new author too take your time trust me it will be better than trying to rush the story I still only got 10 chapters on my own novel but that is mainly due to school yahknow how that is but it also helps you look over the story with a more calmed mind set so yeh it be my best advice and it helps with a lot of the grammer issues that you don't notice at first that and it gives you the ability to not have to stress out about writing something noy liking it rewriting it just to realize it was better before so yeh but anywho I hope you develope a wonderful story. ✌😸
I LOVE IT! THE PLOT IS REFRESHING FOR ME.. Because she likes to be a villainess and so powerful.. ans I am glad that the story starts as she was born.. not in the middle of the story.. I can see the greatness that the MC portrays... SHE IS PRODIGY! I LOVE IT! AND THE MAGIC! SHE HAS MANY MANA AND CHEAT THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE SHE’S UNBEATABLE! I LOVE THE FAMILY! They are so sweet and good..and the fiancee I am looking forward to their romance. I can’t wait to see more of MC’s Queen like revenge! I RECOMMENDED IT! SO GOOD!