September Salmon
The major flaw in this type of work is the same: social isolation. Humans were made to grow in society, a forum is not a substitute for that. Do you want to make this story interesting? Make the MC start to wonder if the forum really is real people, nothing: - I have a system to be jealous of. Make MC want to use the system trying to escape. The essence of this story should be a prison break, not instagram competition.
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