Starting cool, waiting for next chapter. Nice time measurment with the candles :)
Magic looks lit, but overall we still only have a small amount of information to judge the novel.
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A bit too in medias res for my taste and a bit weird with words. Would like to read futher. I can say it looks promising, have some genuin ideas on its own.