Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power

Awesome. not much more to say :)

Good book. nice world building and character development. rlly like the switch between game a the real world. it gives it more depth. Can’t wait to read more

Good editing through out your story. I like your plot and how you describe the setting in your story. Im looking forward to reading more of your story soon. Keep up the great work 👍

I don't want to give any spoilers. Suffice it to say, Lucan gets more powerful than expected. This novel is well worth the time. I definitely reccomend giving this a read.

great story, love the pacing, and character development.

Solid game litrpg with decent progression and some comedic moments. Its a good book that should be on kindle. Hopefully the author can move his work over there soon.

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I love the book he use his brain and he is madly in love with silent he even sacrificed his arm for her which is amazing in it self, and the translation is good and character development is awesome he came from being the weakest to being strong but not to over powered. I'm just hoping he gets a lot more stronger so everyone has to fear him and his power. :)

impressive. good character fleshing. good story. easy flowing grammar. possibly could use a little more description here and there, but that's about all I can think of as critique. Now, I'm going to get coffee, and read more. toodles.

Im about 20 chapters in and this feels like a drag to read. The story has potential and the world is unique but I feel like its very rushed. I cant quite get how the abIlities of our character work or even what he is able to do due to lacking information thats not even being intentionally hidden. The level/system feels like it being forced in there by necessity due the premise of the story taking place in a vr game. Overall, there is great potential but it feels rushed and unpolished.

I have no complaints regarding the plot, characters or any other devices the author uses. While I wouldn't consider it a hidden gem, it is more than acceptable. However, my one gripe with this novel is the author's writing style and the lack of proper build up and explanations. That's not to say that the author does a bad job. It's just that for the better part of my webnovel experience, I've held a deep fascination for immersive and incredibly well thought out worlds. So I suppose that my expectations are absurdly high. Overall, this is a wonderful book, so long as you aren't a ******** fan of slow paced and well detailed worlds.

its meh, characters feel way too forced, writing is also meh, better than most story's on this website but still nothing special. The characters are so bland, especially the mc. Good idea but a failed execution

I'm at chapter 180 and AHHHH! The first 120 chaps didn't have that many grammatical errors but after that... OH BOY. 1. There is a space after the period. It makes it unpleasant to read. Just put space. 2. There are so many grammatical errors. So fucking many. You could put it through a grammar corrector app. Like Grammarly and 90% of the stuff will be fixed. It's just so infuriating how many errors there are. every other sentence. Fix your shit. 3. It's so dumb how simpy Lucan has gotten.

Reviewed at chapter 40. Its really fucking good. Characters are awesome, the mc is smart and feels real. World background is good too. The chapters are really big, but not with some pointless detail but actual good shit. There is some mistyping, but its rare, and it really doesn't take away from the story. I'm looking forward to reading it, thank you author!

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Honestly, I have bad luck reading Original novels on here. I only started reading because of Warlocks and VRMMO. But I'm really enjoying this story, I haven't enjoyed a VRMMO since finishing Rebirth of the Thief Who Roam The World. The only thing that would make it better is if the author went back to the chapters and read the comments about the spelling/grammar mistakes and fixed them, it'd really perfect the story. When I'm reading and see spelling mistakes like "hopping" and "rouge" it really breaks my immersion. Other than that it's an amazing story and you did the romance very good compared to some published novels! Hope you see it through to the end author!

Loving the balance you got going between online n offline lifestyle . No I've come across so far has managed it. Well done and please keep it coming. Your work is appreciated

From the start of the story to the current chapter, the story has kept my interest. It's a great read and super entertaining. The world building is great and left me fantasising about great and abstract scenery.