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huge plot holes and an ADHD FL but overall a fun read if you turn off the skeptical part of your brain. -ignore the lack of a power system -ignore the fact that the FL transmigrated but adjusted shockingly quickly and doesn't seem to value her life (maybe she thinks its all a dream?) -ignore the fact that they info dump stuff like you should already know it ignore the lack of worldbuilding (where is she even in, what is space, how can she teleport without a set destination?) -ignore the fact that the FL was the one to take advantage of the ML even though he was physically stronger than her -ignore the fact that the FL's maid is an idiot who goes along with whatever stupid thing she decides to do -ignore the fact that the FL is hated by absolutely everyone and is considered trash even when she wins 10 on 1 fights
This book is so confusing. There is so much potential but so much random crap going on that youโre not sure what is going on. Itโs almost like the author is manic and bouncing around from idea to idea without really finishing a single thought. The main female lead is interesting but spastic. Thereโs no evolvement of character no discovery just โhereโs a character & hereโs a character and hereโs another guy but donโt ask why these characters are here because theyโre just significantโ. No idea why.
DO NOT BOTHER READING. Seriously, I wasted time even trying to read this book. Firstly, the book starts off so strong with the fl r*ping the ml. Like the hell? And this isnโt a spoiler, this should be stated in the synopsisโ๏ธ In addition, this book is so RUSHED. Like goddamn, slow down. The first 2 chapters wouldโve taken about 5 chapters in a decent book that is at a normal pace. Plus the author randomly jumps from one scene to another so abruptly, it makes you so confused at what is going on in the story. The flow is terrible and the random scenes make it even worse when reading. The FL is...new, not a fan of her character personally. And ml is meh, typical lead tbh. But author, this story couldโve been so much better (especially if you didnโt include r*pe, and had made it consensual?! wow do authors on here know what this word consensual is??๐ฒ). And Iโm also wondering if you just added random stuff when writing thatโs irrelevant to the plot because it popped into your head, cause thatโs what I feel as I read the story. Wont be spending any more time reading this,but hope this review was helpful to those who were wondering if itโs worth it.
I couldn't even make it to the second chapter. I'm sure there are some people interested in an aggressive attempted rapist MC, but I absolutely am not, no matter the genders involved or the contrived "excuses" given (and god, were they abrupt and stupid here). If you do decide to read, I expect the attempted rapist will sooner or later graduate to successful rapist.
Utterly incomprehensible, the author just skips around to the 'good' parts of stories without bothering to explain how the characters got their powers or how they got there or why they know each other or what's going on. I'd say logic goes out the window for the sake of plot but plot also goes out the window with the logic, we're left with the skeleton of some good scenes that would be interesting in a novel where you knew what was going on.
It's quite funny to read but there are too many plots hole and random stuffs that I couldn't keep up with.... 1. Power- what level master equals 20 and grandmaster equal 40 and then there was no more mention about it... 2. FL at first said she had a broken meridian since birth, that's why she helped that MURONG Ghost Girl in order to exchange for spiritual fruit to repair her broken meridian, but in a few chapters after Author changed to she didn't have one since the beginning... LIKE WHAT THE FUCK... 3. A LITTLE BIT OF SEXUAL LANGUAGE OR CONSENSUS maybe funny, but if there are too many there, it will make a novel lost its value 4. WORLD - should explain a bit about which continent she was in, how many countries, background of the story and power stuff. Then STICK TO IT, NOT JUST CREATE AND THEN THROUGH TO THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD. 5. MC BACKGROUND - There's not much to MC background yet, as to what she could do and she could pull out random stuffs at anytime when others needed, but when it came to her time of needed? The only antidote to her poison is s6x. When her maid was poisoned, she stuffed pills in her mouth, but when it came to her, the only solution is s6x. I felt like omg, what's her occupation here? A genius doctor or what? Why could she know what the poison is it? and what is the antidote? In total, Quite confused and random stuffs....I don't recommend it to anyone who is under 18. Also author should put consensus to inappropriate words and sentence at time as well.
I just can't believe this novel is now completed...... It was a long but a beautiful journey..... I loved everything about this book how it began with transformation of Gu Baily and everything it's just awesome ...... The only thing I'm not satisfied with is I really wanted some romance between Mo'Qianer and Lu Feng. U believe it or not I'm writing it with my eyes filled with tears because I just can't believe that now this book is completed. It's unbelievable for me ๐ฅบ๐ญ๐ญ. I wish we can get a second part of this book. Even I wish Bai Yaolian and Su Shenfan can have more children and even they both know that they are childhood friends. And I'm really curious did Su Shenfan removed his mask or not and is his face really yin Yang โฏ๏ธ๐๐. At last I just wanna say I LOVE YOU to all my characters and specially to author for writing such a special story๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโบ๏ธ๐ Come soon with a new book please ๐ฅบ๐ฅบโค๏ธโค๏ธ