Reviews of Everything Hurts

So we got a good story here with great charecters, good development overall everything here his done pretty well, hard to pin point any faults as i can't see any! So keep on going Author you got something good here!

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I like the plot and I like how the characters are fleshed out. I find myself wanting to know what will happen next and nervously biting my nails when I have a clue with what's going on. The only problem I have are the grammatical errors here and there. Besides that though, this story is great and I'm adding it to my library.

The story is very well written with exquisite descriptions, the characters are fleshed out and there feelings conveyed in very adequately. All in all a very good read.

This is a lot darker than what I'm usually used to reading, haha. So far, pretty good. Quality is quite good, though there were a few spots that had some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with a quick edit. The author conveys a lot of emotion through the different character POVs, so good job author. Keep writing!

So far so good. I see a lot of potential in Rebecca but I want to see more of the the "world" of Everything Hurts but I'm sure we're gonna get there eventually. I'm very excited to see where this leads.

I must say I really enjoyed reading this, especially from chapter one. I really love how I got to know fragments of your character's personality in a detailed manner. Besides the fact that it was interesting, I also could feel myself relating to the situation. So far, this is all I have to say. Keep going, author!

There's a lot of emotion here with excellent characters which are established quickly. The author is really good at getting across how much the characters are hurting, through descriptions and the first person perspective used.

So far so good! Please carry on updating! 11 chapters are just too short! I can't wait to read more of it

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