1 Ethiopian Princess

In the 1800s, Ethi, an Ethiopian woman who was 19 years of age when she moved to the U.S., quite naively, to have a better life, she lived with a Navajo man who was owning a barn in the south for a place to stay.

Once Ethi moved there, and she and the Navajo man started to grow feelings for each other living in that great big house alone with each other.

Once they got settled, as in married each other, they got a job in the north and moved there, since the south sucked.

Once they got settled in the north and owned their own house, she had to move and live in another town after 6 years of living in the north together, happily married.

While on the way to live in the new town of Dakota, she started to see Dakoda Natives, which was making her curious, as she'd lived in Ethiopia and had hardly ever seen other Native-Americans before, with their facial features differing to the point where'd she'd think "I've never seen those features on my husband, before. Their faces are so different from his, to be honest."

While the natives were looking at her, thinking "What is she?"

One of their children had said "Mommy, what is that?!" pointing directly at her, and that child, who was a little boy, well, his mother had grabbed him and scolded him saying "Don't do that!" in her language.

After 3 hours of riding back to the south, she fell asleep.

After 14 days of riding to the south, she met a couple of Dakota Indians as they called them, they were quite nice, but one was rude and one of them was weary.

"Do you want water?" she says to the weary one, and pulls out some water from her bag and gives it to him.

He takes it and walks away from her in fear.

She was confused and asked one of the other ones what was wrong, he responded in his language "I don't know what you are saying."

She was confused and didn't know what he was saying, so, she used her hands and tried to point at him in a way that it was as if she was asking the same question, but with her hands.

She didn't do it correctly, and he didn't know that she was asking.

"I tried to point in a way he'd know that I was asking the question, but I think he's confused," she says as he scrunches his face up in confusion at her words.

"Don't worry, Madam, they're just Indians." The white guy riding and driving the horse-driven carriage says to her boldly and disdainfully.

"But, I want him to know, and what does that mean?" She says in Ethiopian (Amharic) which is "gini ፣ isuni inidīyawik'i ifeligalehu ፣ ina ya maleti mini maleti newi?"

"How are you so good at English, Madam?" he says to her in a bold and questioning manner, "My husband taught me."

She says in glee and then looks at the native-Americans, again.

"You know they're language?" She asks in glee, "Yeah, I was a translator." he says in boredom.

"What happened?" she asks, "I quit," he says in boldness.

"Well, do your old job." She says, "I don't want to." he says, "DO IT," she says, and he translates her words to their language.

She was an Isreali Ethiopian with very dark skin, and very beautiful.

"They are from the Yankton Sioux Tribe." The white guy says, "I know, I translated for them."

he says to her in boredom.

"Am I boring you, sir?" She says in anger, she says "You seem to be always bored!"

"It isn't you," he says in Yankton Sioux Tribe language.

"What are you talking about?" one of the men asks, confused.

The man spoke English, "You let me do all that just to speak English!" Ethi says to him in anger but sort of petty jokey anger.

Like annoyance, almost.

"Yes, come with me, I'll teach you to speak our language." he says to her, "Oh, I must go to Dakoda, am I there?"

White driver: "Almost, ma'am. Just 5 more days and we're there. I hope. A horse can go 55 miles an hour. I hope I don't die as I cannot see the town from here."

It is 1890.

"Don't worry, we'll get there!" she says in confidence as she pulls herself out the window but only shoulder length out the window.

"Ma'am, I'll follow, the place can be very dangerous," he says in a flirtatious and charming way.

"I don't think so." The white man says and snaps the horse and causes it to run away from him.

This caused Ethi to fall back, not falling out of the carriage.

Her shoulders hit the side of the window, she pushes herself back into the carriage.

"Why did you do that?" she asks, infuriated, "He's a rapist." The white driver says.

"How do you know?" She says, "Is it because of his race?" She says, "I never allowed it in the south and I won't-" he cuts her off with "He asked you to come with him, most likely alone to North Dakota, then he flirts with you and asks to come on the carriage because to walk while someone else is driving makes no sense at all, he's a rapist." the white driver says. "And he hardly knows you, ma'am," he says to her.

She scoffs and looks out the window.

5 days later, they're almost in North Dakota.

"I see North Dakota, or it may not be, I don't know." the white man says, tired.

"Can I stop, now?" he says.

"Alright!" she says in glee.

He gets off the horse carefully as not to scare it and walks to the carriage, opens the door and grabs some water from her bag and drinks it.

"We are alone, I have a gun, if you need it, use it, I'm going to sleep inside the carriage for a few hours," he says as he gets into the carriage and starts to take the bag she has and lay it over himself, after pouring out it's content to her dismay and shock he lays back in the seat of the carriage on the left of her and after he states his sentence, falls asleep.

She begins to carefully pull the bag off of him 1 minute later, in that minute she looks at him angrily.

After pulling the bag off, she takes her items and puts them inside the bag quietly.

After that, she puts them right in her lap.

A man from the Little Shell Band of Chippewa Indians came to their carriage about 5 hours later, "You take so long to wake up!" she shouted but he never woke up, merely made some slight movement in his sleep.

The man knocked on her door, she jumped.

She looks out the window, clutching onto her bag and asks "Do you speak English?"

"I do!" he says to her in a flirtatious way, "Are you flirting with me?" she asks, "Yes, you are a wonderful sight, you have the most beautiful eyes and bright shining wonderous hair." the man says.

"Aww, thank you, that was so sweet!" she says in blushing glee.

"But, I'm married." She says to him in a joyous but platonic tone of voice, like the last sentence she spoke.

"Aww, I could have had two wonderful boys with you." he bluntly states to her,

"Thank you, well, are you heading somewhere?"

she asks, "You sound quite naive, I will say." he says to her gleefully and optimistically, "I'm not." she says sternly but responds "Tell, how long until we reach North Dakota?" "11 days, miss." he says to her, "11 days?!" she says in shock.

"Oh No, and he's just laying there wasting time!" she says to him in dismayed shock as she turns to look at her sleeping driver while hitting him with the bag she was clutching so close to her. He stays sleeping throughout this, "My gosh, how can he sleep through that?!" she says in shock.

"Let him sleep, it's a long journey," he says to her in a flirty way.

"Stop flirting with me, I've had just about enough of it!" she says angrily and sternly to get him away.

"I will if you let me in." he says, "No!" she replied in a shock and concerned way, "I'm joking," he says in a sly manner, which worries her.

"Why are you trying to get in my carriage?"

She asks concerned, "To get to you, of course." he replies, she immediately started shaking the driver harshly and literally started to yell at the native-American to "Leave me alone, go away!"

"I can just take the horse and ride off." the native says, which deeply alarms her.

"Please, stop!" she says, ignoring the man sleeping in the carriage for the man trying to ride off with the carriage.

The native starts to walk to the horse when she opens her carriage door to go after him, that was all he heard and wanted.

The native went after her, when she saw he was going after her, she tried to get back in the carriage and get the gun but he grabbed her and pulled her away.

"Stop, Markus!" she screams, the name was the name of the driver, but he was sleeping, and unfortunately, his butt was on the unloaded gun. He was fat.

You could see the bullet bag on the floor, leaking some, and the part of the gun showing under his butt, she never noticed it there, though.

"Wake up, you fat lard!" she screams as the native pulls her away, "Stop it!" she screams as she elbowed him in the side, but he wouldn't let her go, so she stepped on his foot, he found a nearby rock and bashed her head against it to knock her out.

It worked, and she's a little tender-headed, so, it hurt a lot.

"If you survive this, its no wonder he left you to yourself." the native says and drags her knocked out body across the dirt.

At the Comanche tribe.

"You will be working for one of the Comanches, wake up!" he said to her.

Ha had already had a buyer, she woke up and kicked him when she recognized him.

"Get away!" she screams and then runs off, as she kicked him in the privates, and ran, but she accidentally tripped on a gray rock, (it's not a white girl in horror movies thing, anymore, now!)

she fell, and then the Comanche man she was going to be sold to showed up and picked her up and laid her in the arms of another Comanche man, he tied her up using the rope he was holding over his shoulder, and they put her on the horse to the Comanche tribe.

Historian Pekka Hämäläinen, in his 2009 book The Comanche Empire, writes of Comanche uses of slavery during their period of dominance of the American Southwest between 1750 and 1850. The Comanche exercised hegemony in part by numerical superiority, and enslavement was part of that strategy. Hämäläinen writes that Comanches put captives through a rigorous process of enslavement—a dehumanizing initiation that brought a non-Comanche captive into the tribe through renaming, tattooing, beating, whipping, mutilation, and starvation—but stipulates that once a person was enslaved, there were varying degrees of freedom and privilege she or he could attain. Male captives might be made blood bondsmen with their owners, protecting them from ill-treatment and casual sale; women might be married into the tribe, after which time they became, as Hämäläinen puts it, "full-fledged tribal members"; younger, more impressionable children might be adopted outright. After a period of trauma, captives could, quite possibly, attain quasi-free status; their own children would be Comanches.

Luckily, it was only between 1750-1850, which means it ended in 1850.

But, He did it, anyway.

Before, It took a long time to get to the tribe, they went to the Comanche tribe, they told the chief she was a slave, and she was bawling.

They changed her name from Ethi to NA'URA, and they tattooed her, they beat her and whipped her, they cut her nose off and starved her for two days.

She got scared after that, of course, and tried to run away, because, why not?

But they caught her and beat her.

After 4 days, of which she was being fed to keep her alive, she was brought to the chief, tied up and her hands bound together with rope, she was devastated, crying and feeling alone.

The tribe she was in is not a real Comanche tribe, it's one of them, but it is fiction, it's called Aganoth.

Because I don't want to stain the names of any good chiefs there, who most likely probably didn't know about the enslavements at the time in 1890.

When she was brought to him, she was ticked off, as in very angry, "How dare you!" she screams and spits at him in anger, not thinking this through.

"Not how dare I, but how dare YOU." he responds, he orders a man to "beat her." In Comanche language.

When the man he asked to beat her came to her,

She bites his finger off for cutting her nose off, as that was the man who did it, and spits it at the chief.

This turned him (the chief) on because he saw her as a strong woman and made him want her as a Concubine.

"That was...kinda cute, PECOS, get her dressed up, I'll keep her as my slave personally."

He told Pecos, who was confused at this situation as a whole, "Why is she here, chief?"

Pecos asks, "To be my slave, of course!" the chief replies, which sends a shiver down Pecos's spine, knowing how the tribe treats slaves, he felt sick and says "You want her as a slave?" "Yes." the chief tells him.

"Welcome to the, um, um," Pecos had trouble greeting her and says "Welcome to the Aganoth tribe, my dear."

in a sad and disheartened state.

"I won't be your slave!" she screams as Pecos walks up to her and grabs her arm, she is really angry at him.

"I won't, you evil man!" she screams as she kicks Pecos in the leg, and steps on his foot.

"OW!" Pecos screamed, "You hurt me!" Pecos shouted at her in shock, but then he began to a small realization and asks "Have you been already made a slave?"

"NO!" she said as she bit his arm, causing him to scream, "You are a fighter!" the chief says, "You can come on my army, but if you'll be my wife, you must be cultured." The chief says which provokes her to step on both the feet of the men holding her arms behind her (Besides Pecos) with both her own feet and kick them in the legs, she began to fight and hard.

the men call another man to help them, another one comes and stabs her in the only arm she has left, this stops her completely.

"I hate you!" she says in spite of the man that stabbed her and spit at him on purpose.

She started to sob. Pecos backed away from her in guilt, pity, sadness, and shame.

He started to tear up and she started screaming "Let me go!" in tears, he started bawling in sympathy.

"Stop crying, Pecos, and take her to my room." The chief told Pecos, who agreed to do it and took her by force to the chief's room kicking and screaming for mercy and begging for him to let her go.

In the chief's room, Pecos loosens her ropes but not enough to where she can attack him, she says "Please, let me go!"

"I'm sorry, I don't want to hurt you, I really don't, I just can't disobey, I am a slave, too..." Pecos says in tears for her pain.

"You can run away with me, and we'll be free together!" she says in fear and terror.

Slavery of black people ended in 1865, as she'd known, so she never thought THIS would happen.

"I'm supposed to be free!" she stated, "Why am I here?" she says in tears.

"Don't worry, he's not a bad owner if you obey him." Pecos says in tears, "Not a bad owner?! NOT A BAD OWNER?! WHO OWNS PEOPLE?!" She screams,

"I'll free you, tonight," Pecos says, letting his emotions get the better of him for a good reason.

"Thank you, but loosen these ropes-" the chief walks in and see them talking, she cuts herself off seeing him.

He pulls Pecos away in a rage and takes him to the other Aganoth Comanche and tells them to "Whip Pecos for his crime!"

And after he throws Pecos to the ground, they drag him away by his feet like in a horror movie.

"Where is he?!" she screams, she uses her head as a support to help her stand up, and she successfully does stand up and runs out of the room but the chief grabs her and pulls her back in and ties her legs up with rope.

She was determined "Too much of a fighter to let go" and let her stay alive to flirt with her, but never untied her, she was to stay on his bed forever.

"You will stay on this bed, tied up, for the rest of your life until you behave." The chief says to her horror.

She finally snaps and calls him an "Evil, worthless, cruel man!"

which sets him off and he says to her "You can stay here forever, no matter what!!!" and he storms off.

She sobs, but gets an idea, she knows she's married, but if she can get the chief to like her, and as she's heard, if she marries into the tribe, she'd be a member, which would alleviate some troubles she's in, especially married to the leader of the tribe itself, she considered it to be a working idea, but a devastating one at the same time.

So, whenever the chief would come to flirt with her, she'd get romantic, flirt back, and complement him, feeling disgusted.

He got to like her more, and loosened her ropes, with time, he let her out of her leg ropes, and her arm and body ropes, but kept her hands bound.

He locked her in his room, as well, to keep her from leaving, because she'd leave, to be honest, even though she'd had an idea, it doesn't mean she'd follow it.

Pecos came into the room and unlocked the door, there were men outside the door, so, he locked it again.

"Why do you flirt with the chief?" he asks, confused and shocked, "I'm trying to get him to let me go, or at least make my life easier." she said, he was shocked, but was familiar with the rules of the tribe and states "Get him gold, he'll let you lose, it's in the basement."

Ethi: "I'm locked in here with men outside who know my face, and my hands are bound, it'd look strange."

Pecos, looking for a sharp knife, says: "There must be something here you can cut it with!"

There was a little glass shard on the ground she'd never noticed.

"There's a glass shard!" Pecos says it was almost three inches tall.

He uses it to cut the rope her hand was bound with, then she realizes "Wait if my hands are cut loose, how do I explain that?!" she says, she was hasty, she cried with great mourning over her regrets.

Pecos comforted her, and said, "I will get the gold and bring it to him before he comes into the room and say that it's from you."

She kissed him on the cheek, she'd been in the tribe for 7 months, she was so happy that she was going to get out of this hellhole.

Pecos leaves the door wide open when he leaves, only to have it slammed shut by the man as she's trying to get out of the room by herself, the door actually slammed her in the face.

"Help! Help! Pecos!" she screams for Pecos.

"I will be back!" Pecos screamed.

She started crying but letting her mind go wild on the thought of "When he gets back, things'll be better, right? Yeah, they will be."

When he got back, he found the chief to be nowhere, he ran to her room and saw her whole body roped up.

The chief was standing, looming over her body on the cold and soft bed, he wasn't on the bed, he was just standing staring at her.

She was trying to scream and to roll off the bed to roll away but she couldn't.

Pecos quickly handed him the gold and said "What a good joke, she was trying to stall you long enough to give you this gold, she hired me to." he says in fake glee.

The chief looks at it and says "It looks like my gold." "But, it isn't," Pecos says, as he'd replaced the real gold with fake gold.

The chief went back to check and found the copper piece in its place and mistook it for real gold.

Pecos was sent back to his room, in which Pecos told Ethi that "I replaced the real gold with copper-gold." as he whispered in her ear.

"I'm scared." she tried to scream, but she was gagged, she was crying in that situation, then the chief came in, Pecos was holding the gold he stole for Ethi, the chief says to her "You can be untied, thank you for getting it for me, my love."

The words disgusted Ethi, "Let's be alone." the chief said to Pecos, who left the room with great hesitation.

The chief looked at Ethi and stated "You'll be a great wife." and untied her, but left her ankles and wrists tied up, and mouth gagged.

She felt sad and devastated and regretful she ever made this plan.

"I'm sorry, David." she tries to say, "David?!" The chief screams in jealousy, but David was her husband.

"Nothing, just...my brother." She tries to say, "Good." he says.

After a week, the chief married her against her will and took away her gag to get her to kiss him at the wedding.

"Without the gag, you can say your vows and kiss me at our wedding." the chief says,

"No, I won't marry you!" she says, regretting this whole situation.

"You WILL!" he screamed and beat her.

after the wedding, about a month later, he told her "You need to give me a son, someone who will live on my legacy and rule the tribe."

"No!" she says, "He will be happy under my care." the chief says, trying to convince her.

"Never!" she says in tears.

"I'll have to get a child somehow,"

he says angrily and ominously, the chief, with her ankles and wrists bound, raped her.

After the rape, she sobbed all night.

After three weeks, she was already having morning sickness, then after 5 months, she was being taken to a teepee, the chief lived in a mansion.

then after 4 months, she gave birth to a baby girl.

The chief was furious and shouted at her "You couldn't give me a son!" she was in his mansion, in tears, in his room, thinking of how he'll mistreat the baby.

"Please don't hurt the baby!"

She cries.

"I don't want this girl!" he shouts, she was shocked at how he can coldly reject his own child.

"Please don't hate her, it's not her fault!" she states bluntly in fear and anger.

"I'll take her to another tribe!" he shouts, she tries to stop him, she is only bound at the wrist now, but it was so she could spread her legs to give birth, and nothing more, the men were in the middle of binding her ankles, already, she kicks the men in the middle of the binding of her ankles, and she grabs the child, noticing the guards was about to leave, she saw the chief holding her back and called Pecos to come and save her, so he came and punched the chief to help her run off, and she was let go because the punch knocked the chief out, and the guard that opened the door, along with the other guards, came and checked on him.

She took this as an opportunity and ran out with her daughter, and when she had escaped the mansion, cuz all the guards showed up for the birth, there were only 59.

It was a big mansion, too, with only 70 slaves only for the chief himself, besides her.

She unlocked the front door with her mouth using a key she found on the couch in the living room and escaped the prison that was that dreadful mansion.

In the tribe, there was a decrepit movie theater located in a rougher part of the tribe, which, wasn't that far from the mansion, ironically. It was built in 1799. Some locals claim to have seen the ghost of a serial killer wandering around the premises, that was a metaphor for the chief. An investigator who went to visit it awhile back vanished without a trace, he was enslaved and is Pecos, Pecos is from another Comanche tribe.

She ran in there and hid in there for two days, when, finally, the Comanches from where Pecos was from came to save Pecos after finally finding out he went to the Aganoths and one looking for him, found Ethi, who kicked and screamed and the one English speaker told her they were here to rescue her and Pecos. Pecos was from the Yamparikas.

It was his family that came to save him, she was brought back to the Yamparikas and they got Pecos, who was running away from the mansion and trying to escape himself, having gained more Confidence because of talking to Ethi.

They found him in a moderately-sized house that looks a bit old-fashioned and is in poor condition. The interior is done in dark colors. The yard is large and resembles a meadow. It became one of the filming locations for a well-known mystery movie in the 1930s.

He went home to his home tribe in tears and pain, he had gotten beaten and cut to the point he had 50 scars on his legs.

His family consisted of 10 people in total, 7 men, one being his father, one being his father's father, one being his father's uncle, and the rest his brothers, and 3 women, one his mother, one his sister, and the other his mother's sister.

In the Yamparikas, Pecos had 10 panic attacks, one for every night.

On the last night, in a teepee.

Ethi's name has been restored, she tells Pecos's mother her name was "NA'URA."

and that she's taking her old name back, now.

"I commend you for that," she says, she was the one English speaker.

She kissed Ethi on her cheek, just then, Pecos started screaming.

His mother ran into his teepee and started to console him.

Ethi walked to his teepee, but never entered it, she was holding her newborn child, and sobbed.

One day, Pecos sent his brother, PAHAYOKO, to take her back to Houston, Texas on the fastest horse they had with her baby, saying "Take her back to her husband and home, okay?" while sobbing.

He did as he asked, and she was returned home after a really long time.

Once her husband saw her with the baby, he didn't care, he ran to her and hugged her tightly, Pecos's brother took the baby just before the husband wrapped his arms around her.

She told him "Baby, this baby is mine."

He said "What?"

"I've...I was raped by a chief and he forced me to marry him, this is his baby," she says while sobbing lightly.

He looked at her in tears and said "You were raped? Forced to marry? He married you?! We're married?! Oh my gosh!" he ran into his house and locked the door. He sat on the floor and cried.

After 4 weeks, her husband began distancing himself from the baby and her, as he did, she started to metaphorically break.

"I can't take care of your baby, anymore," he told her one day sitting at the dinner table with her.

"What?" she says in tears, realizing what he's doing.

"I want you to give the baby to my brother in Ohio," he says in anger.

"Never! This is my child!" She says in anger and tears, "Why not? HE raped you!" her husband says, "Why would I? I loved her, okay, I can't help that, it just happened!" she says in tears, knowing she could never give her child away.

He stormed out of the room in tears.

She just cried.

7 years later...

The baby girl's name is Zala, it's Ethiopian.

"Zala!" her mother calls from the kitchen, as she gets ready for her 6th day of school.

"It's my 6th day of school, I don't wanna go, anymore!" At first, Zala wasn't allowed to go to school, out of fear that she'd be mistreated there but then her mother realized she needed a better education than what she could offer Zala.

It was 1898, and Zala was just finishing her hair.

"Baby, I want you to be nice to white girls and boys, cuz they'll be nice to you if you're nice to them, and the black boys and the black girls, cuz they go through so much, and they'll be nice to you if you're nice to them." Her mother says to Zala.

"Okay, mommy," Zala says.

Her mother is taking her outside to go to school, where the white driver, who has been more loving towards native-Americans because of her daughter.

"I missed you a lot, Miss Heckle." the driver told Ethi.

"Really?" she said as she got into the red American-made gasoline car, Bicycle mechanics J. Frank and Charles Duryea of Springfield, Massachusetts, had designed the first successful American gasoline automobile in 1893, then won the first American car race in 1895, and went on to make the first sale of an American-made gasoline car the next year.

The White driver was forced to learn how to drive them in 1897, January, 7th.

They drove to the school which was an enormous public elementary school has an ultra-retro look to it. Overall the school has a fair reputation, which is starting to change thanks to a new principal.

Retro means imitative of a style, fashion, or design from the recent past.

When she went in, she saw the children chatting it up and laughing with each other,

she wished they'd let her join, so she goes up to a white girl, who looks at her and scoffs and pushed her away.

One of the black girls comes and hugs her, along with a pretty cute black boy.

AADA was the name of the black girl, and the black boy's name was AABRAHAM.

Aada looks at her in glee and says "Come play with us!" as they are 6 and 7.

"I don't want to," Zala says sadly and walks past the two.

This makes AABRAHAM sad, and Aada too.

"Why did she do that?" she says to AABRAHAM, she looks in Zala direction, who is going to her, far off, locker, and AABRAHAM says "I don't know, people are mean to her."

Aada looks at her friend in sadness and goes over to her and says "I'm sorry that people are mean to you, Zala."

and Zala looks at her and says "It's okay..." sadly. Aada was 6, and AABRAHAM was 7.

In class, the white teacher looks at them as if they committed a crime, whereas the white girls get to go without that look.

The white boys were standing outside the class because the teacher hates men.

"You boys are like plagues, you'd think white boys would be better than you all but they're just like you black people." the teacher says against boys in general.

12 white boys were standing outside the class, 41 white girls in the class, 12 black girls, including Zala, 14 black boys with only one black boy still in class not standing with the white boys.

The black boys go inside the class and ask the teacher why they have to stand outside, "Cuz you men are ugly pigs!"

The teacher says and the black boys go back outside but one, Gregory.

His full name was Mr. Gregory, last name Loust.

"My name is Mr. Gregory Loust, and yes, my full name is actually Mr. Gregory, my last name is Loust." the black boy said,

"I'm the black boy who's cool," he says in pride.

The teacher tells him to "Go back outside!" and he says "Heck, I'll do that when I'm playin'." with a mocking sly tone of voice.

The teacher calls the principal, when he gets there, he's shocked at all the boys who are not in class.

He walks in there and asks "Why are all these boys outside of class?"

"Cuz, they were not following the rules." the teacher lied, but in reality "No, they were! She just don't like men!" the black boy confessed.

"Is this true, Ms. Coldburg?" the principal asks her sternly, knowing she can be rude to men. there was a 6-second pause, "They were-"

the teacher was cut off by the principal who said: "So, he's telling the truth, tell all the white boys and black boys to come in class."

The teacher screams in shock, "The black boys, too?!"

she says in surprise, "YES, THE BLACK BOYS, TOO." The Principal says in annoyance and anger.

She had to go outside, and then sternly yell "GET YOUR BLACK BEHINDS AND MEN BUTTS IN THE CLASS, YOU TOO, WHITE BOYS!" and she stomped back in with all the boys she forced out of the classroom, Aada and Zala giggles to each other like little girls do.

Aada was African Caribbean, while Aabraham was African.

So was the black boy, Mr. Gregory, as in, he's African.

They are all African-American, however, by Nationality and were born in America.

All the boys sat in their seats and the girls looked at them like "Oh gosh, that was quite rude of her." like a worried way, tho.

When the principal left, the teacher ranted all the class time about it and never taught.

after school, when Zala went home, her step-father came to her and told her sternly to "Go to your room and do not come out as your mother is away in the flower shop working." Zala understood his request and ran to her room.

Zala's step-father locked her in her room and left her there.

"Mommy will be back, Zala, it'll take four hours, but she'll be back."

Zala says to her dolls.

Her dolls are all white, they look like porcelain dolls.

"I love you, Porty." she says to one of her dolls, "I want you...Ethiopian, but I like you as you are, I'm just gonna paint you brown and make you look like mom." she says to her favorite doll.

"I hope I don't ruin her," she says in worry, she spends minutes meticulously trying to not destroy her doll.

It succeeds, and she ends up with a brown-skinned doll.

"It worked, she's not ugly! I made her prettier than before!" Zala shouts in excitement, "I'm usually terrible at painting my dolls!" she says in dismay.

She'd paint them, then "At least mommy fixes them." she says.

You see, her mommy painted all of her dolls. Even fine tuned them and taught her how to paint them.

"Mommy paints and fine tunes my dolls all the time, I'm glad he taught me yesterday how to make my own doll, it's so wonderful to know how to create things!" she says.

Then a bang is heard on her door, Zala jumps and drops her newly painted doll, some paint comes off, but the doll is plastic, so it doesn't break.

They only look like Porcelain dolls, thanks to her mommy.

"Oh no, my doll!" she screams, her step-father's voice rips through the air like a thunder strike.

"You have no idea what's comin'!" she hears, "Oh my gosh!" she screams and takes her doll and hides under her bed.

Her step-father unlocks the door to her room and comes and breaks all of her dolls except for the one she had hidden under the bed with her in revenge for the rape of his wife, screaming "You raped her, married, and now I have to live with the reminder!" this makes Zala tear up.

He rips up her covers and pushes down her shelves, and drawers.

He rips the dolls' hair out of their heads, only the doll she took under the bed with her is safe.

He walks out of her room, taking her dolls' hairs and locks her in there, outside, he burns their hairs.

Her hair is slightly tattered from trying to get under the bed.

She cries at the sight of her destroyed dolls.

She gets out from under the bed and cries sitting on the floor, hugging her doll.

Rocking back and forth.

When her mother comes home, she is on the floor crying, as he'd come in and beat her.

She has 50 bruises and 6 cuts.

When her mom comes to her room door and sees the door is locked, she calls for her husband to "David, give me the keys to my daughter's door!"

he comes and gives her the key, he says "She had hurt herself and I stopped her, but it was hard."

she gets worried and looks inside the room, to her shock, she's horrified, and says "How did this happen?!" he says "I beat her and tore her stuff up."

"You beat my daughter?!" she screams and punches him in the face, she runs to her daughter and pulls her with her doll in her daughter's hand out of the house and to the gas-driven car.

He chases after her and threatens to kill her if she leaves and she replies "How if you don't know where I am? This IS your ONLY car!" and drives the car herself, as the white driver taught her.

"Who taught you to drive a car, mommy?" Zala asks, "Markus, the man who drives us." her mother answers.

Zala looks at her doll in tears and says "I'm sorry for making daddy mad..."

"It's not your fault." her mother says in tears as they drive away.

4 years later...

Zala is 14, and ready to go to the "Little patch" with her friends.

A park-like place with fountains, little stores, and a maze-like structure with signs telling where they are going.

Mr. Gregory is her lover.

She and her mother live in the little flower shop her mother owns.

She leaves the house and goes to her new American 1904 car, her mother waits for in the car.

She lets her mother accompany her to "the park." a place in the circle back of the bush maze, behind it, was a forest.

They went here regularly.

her mother sits in a chair in front of "the park" which was a 30 feet long and 40 feet wide open space in the form of a circle, as she goes to her friends, Aada and Aabraham.

Aada's outfit is done in pastel orange, dark brown, silver, and cream. She is wearing a simple top with a single short fitted sleeve and a pair of leggings, as well as a pair of slipper shoes. Her accessories include a bracelet and a simple circlet.

The maze was 60 feet long, and 100 feet wide.

There is a small Candy booth on the bushy walls of "the park" and two benches on the walls.

Mr. Gregory was waiting in "the park," too.

He stared at her and walked over to her skipping in a jazzy way, and says "Hi."

This makes her and her friend jump, But Aabraham only jumps a little.

She turns to see him when she does, he kisses her lips passionately.

She laughs and says "That was awkward!"

He gets offended and says "How was it awkward, it was perfect!"

"I was joking!" she says in offense.

Aada decides to sit on the ground.

Aada rolled her eyes and says "Don't argue."

"We won't." Mr. Gregory says.

Aada says to Zala "Hey, you seen a man walking around? He speaks English, he's an Indian, he calls himself The Numunu but he says it means he's a Comanche, really nice, I have a crush on him.

He says he needs to see you or something, but I didn't know him, so I was like 'no way!'" she says in confusion, slight love struck-ness, and kindly.

Zala: "Um, you have a strange way of speaking. But, really? Cool! A Comanche saved my mom's life, his name was Pecos." She says in both worry and glee at the same time.

Mr. Gregory: "Didn't Comanches kidnap your mom?" he says in worry.

Zala: "Not really, another man kidnapped her and sold her to them, I am half-Comanche." she says in a worried and sad way to her lover, "And you can't use the wrong actions of another to cancel out the good actions of some!" she yells at him in defense of Pecos, to whom her family was indebted to.

Mr. Gregory: "Okay, I'm sorry, God's girl." Mr. Gregory stated to her in a loving and sweet, and kind and compassionate way to win her affections towards him.

"The Comanche was like: 'I need to see Zala right now because she's the Chief's daughter!' and I was so confused, your dad is like, a chief?! Like a ruler or something, cuz I heard they had chiefs over people and they were like, the kings or something!" Aada says in slight worry and enthusiasm.

"Yeah, he's a rapist, he raped my mom, who was already married to my step-father, and married her against her will," Zala stated in rage towards her biological father.

"Which tribe, dude?" Aada says to her, "What is 'dude?' and Aganoth." Zala says, "Sounds like Agony." Mr. Gregory bluntly states, wondering why the name is similar.

"Mom says Pecos's mom gave the tribe the name when she met their chief and the tribe's members, who all seemed to hate their lives there.

It was really sad." Zala states sadly.

"And..." Mr. Gregory says, "Why did they name their own tribe that?" Mr. Gregory says, "Because, The chief is a sadist who liked the idea. Let's talk about something else." Zala states, tearing up.

"You should think of your girlfriend more, Greg," Aada stated a little upset that Zala was crying, they were BFFs.

"Best Friends Forever" (No one says that. It's for the actors to know how she feels a little.)

"I didn't mean to," he says a little upset, himself. "Let's go to the restaurant down the street and eat something, my dad has money." Mr. Gregory says in a gleeful tone to perk up his girlfriend and friends.

Just then, a Comanche man walks up behind him and pulls him into the Bushes, the friends are shocked and yell "Mr. Gregory?!" and then they start to run after him.

They followed them as the strange stranger takes the fighting Mr. Gregory through the park and into the Park forest, where I live in Houston, Texas forests don't have wolves or bears, it was a safe bet he wouldn't get eaten by anything because that's where he lives.

The Comanche was literally dragging him, as halfway through the forest trip, Mr. Gregory punched him in the face, so the dude knocked him down and grabbed him by his feet, and like in a horror movie, dragged him away.

Bugs are a thing, though.

Big thing.

Bugs were bumping him in the face, like wasps, bees, and flies. A butterfly never touched him but flew past him.

A ladybug landed on his head, then it flew off, By the way, the wasp was hot on their trail. More wasps came out of the shadows and started to chase them, so the Camanche took him and jumped into a pond and the wasps flew away and then the two men came out and he kept dragging him,

Sarcastically speaking, What a wonderful day.

Mr. Gregory was now screaming, the friends were calling out to him in terror as he screamed, they followed his screams.

Then, they ended up in front of a portal, a bright blue portal, which looked like it was a pathway to another world, literally, when it really was just a teleportation device.

"That's a portal?!" Mr. Gregory states in shock, "Marauwe and Oh, no, it's just merely a teleportation device, no big deal." The Comanche man says.

The Comanche valued modesty: When warriors went into battle, they went in pairs because one could return and report for one who may not. A warrior never "bragged" on his or her own brave deeds.

The most common greeting in the Comanche language is Marauwe which means "Report." This goes back to those times of warriors coming back from somewhere and reporting what they observed.

"Teleportation, what's that?!" Gregory says, "You don't know what teleportation is?" The Comanche states, shocked.

"No wonder you're terrified!" The man says in shock, "So, this is new?" the man says in pure shock and surprise that he'd have no idea like it was just normal for him or something, which it was.

"Mr. Greg, baby, I'm coming!" His lover states in a total panic, "I was hoping that'd be bait, now I need to jump into the portal so they can do it, too." the man says.

"What?!" Greg says in terror, "Why?!" Greg says he's freaking out.

"It's just teleport-" the man was cut off by a hit, luckily for his ambitions, The one he wanted, Zala, jumped on him and accidentally, as he was standing right in front of the portal, knocked herself and him into the Portal to Aganoth.

Mr. Gregory: "NOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

the man, in shock, looked at her intently, then, after 6 seconds, stated to her in a joyous tone of voice but also in pure utter shock "Marauwe, Welcome to Aganoth!"

Back on the other side of the portal, where her friends were, they were panicking.

Aada: "Where are they?!"

Mr. Gregory in a total butt load of terror stated "Why did she do that?! I'm going in there, Wait, no, but I gotta get her!"

Aabraham: "I gotta pray about this because they went in there, are they dead?!" he says in a total panic, "Why pray?!" Aada complains, "Because a girl just went into some weird giant blue thing!" Aabraham states weirded out by this whole situation.

"That thing!" Mr. Gregory pointed at the blue portal as he stood there in sadness and terror as he said those words.

Aada: "Do we try to find her in there?" she states in worry, calming down a little bit.

Mr. Gregory: "I have to, what if it's, like, a pathway to somewhere, the guy talked about it like it was normal." and he says it like he's about to do the stupidest thing in the world for love, but the heck with it!

Aabraham said in alarm, "Because he's CRAZY! We're not going to go in that, that's killing yourself!"

Aada was already gone.

"Where's Aada?" Aabraham said.

In Aganoth...

"WHAT IS THIS PLACE?!" Aada states in shock, Aganoth has changed over the years, it had Megaliptic sculpture-like buildings, all gold, and the ground was silver.

Zala was with the man, who named himself "HUUPI-PAHATI"

in Comanche, Meaning "tall tree."

"My name is Tall Tree, but my real name is HUUPI-PAHATI, it just means Tall tree," he casually says to her as they ride on a horse to the castle that once WAS a mansion has had an upgrade.

They are around what seemed to be a thousand Comanches in one setting.

HUUPI-PAHATI: "Enjoy the view? Yeah, I thought so. It's cool, isn't it? The place is awesome. It's changed a lot over the years. The ground was always silver in this part of town, goes for about 600 acres of land, the rest is pure dirt, to be honest because it's true."

"Um, where am I?" Zala says in a scared way because this situation freaks people out a lot.

HUUPI-PAHATI: "I'm going to take you to your castle, it's great, really big and fashionable, and I like it, it's got a lot of rooms and a liking for damsels like you, I got that from some random white guy."

Zala: "Why am I here?"

HUUPI-PAHATI: "Oh, well, you see, you're going to forge a relationship with your father, take his crown, and rule the division, Yeah, I think this town is like a little part of the whole Comanche tribe, so, this is all you'll be ruling, anyway."

Zala: "HUH?!"

HUUPI-PAHATI: "Lucky girl. If you don't die on the way, of course, which is why we want you to rule, you see, the guards, instructed by the king, tend to kill random people of the division no matter the fact they are part of his division, they just can only kill one a day."

Zala: "How are you so calm?"

HUUPI-PAHATI: "Because after saying 'If you don't die on the way, of course' I realized this is their off day, and I'm a highly functioning Sociopath."

"Are you okay?" Zala says in worry.

"Nope, not at all." The man says, his speech turning sadder, "Anyway!" his speech perking back up, again, "How are you, today?!" he says to in a highly gleeful fashion, which worries her a bit.

He's actually trying to get her to calm down, but he's a little traumatized, and he is a highly functioning sociopath, and he's worried because the town's leader and guards are why.

Back to her friends who haven't gone through the portal

"She went in there, I don't know about you, but I'm going through that portal!" Mr. Gregory says, traumatized by the loss of his girlfriend and friend.

Aabraham: "Are you really that crazy?!"

Mr. Gregory says in a determined but scared and caring way "Heck yes!"

Aabraham: "If you survive, I'm coming with you. Just put your hand through the portal if you go somewhere, anywhere!"

Aabraham has no idea what is happening.

"Okay!" Mr. Gregory says, then he turns to face the portal, starts prepping himself, and then he backs up and runs into the portal, he's screaming.

Aabraham: "Mr. Greg-" Gregory puts his hand out of the portal to be seen by him, his hand is moving slightly, which scares Aabraham and causes him to jump, His hand moves around to show him he's alive and fine.

"You're alive?!" He says but Greg can't hear him, Greg puts his hand back into the other side of the portal, and Aabraham gets scared, and nearly runs off when he thinks of his friends, and decides to stay there and go into the portal with his friends and says "This won't kill me."

Aabraham runs towards the portal and then jumps into the portal, he actually lives through it and says "I'm alive!"

"What the heck?!" as he takes a look at the scenery, "Gregory, where am I?"

"I've never done this before, you tell me!" Mr. Gregory states.

Gregory: "Let us go find the girls."

The scene turns to AADA'S direction and shows her standing 3 feet away from them in front of a store that's green and silver and gold and blue and pink.

Aada: "I'm right here, um, you want a antelope?"

She says, handing a plate of freshly cooked antelope towards their faces, while still being about 3 feet away from them and in front of a store selling food.

The scene turns to Aabraham and his friend, Mr. Gregory, who is standing right next to each other and says "Nope."

An hour later...

Aada is walking around the town with her friends to find Zala, who isn't that far off, she's only 41 miles away from them.

Mr. Gregory: "How far is she away from us?"

Aabraham: "God says she's 41 miles away."

Aada: "God?"

Aabraham: "I'm a Prophet."

Mr. Gregory: "So, we may never find her? Great, just great-"

Aabraham: "God says to go look behind that tree, you'll see a porta-potty, a thing that's a big square blue box that's shaped like a long square. It's tall."

Mr. Gregory: "What's a porta Potty?"

Aabraham: "God says an American will make it in the future, themselves. One for peeing and pooping will be created in the 1960s, the man who made it was credited with several innovations, which then led to him inventing a "polyethylene plastic portable restroom" in the 1960s which was," he paused for 5 seconds then popped out and said "A porta potty. Thus, the first U.S. patent for a portable restroom was issued to Harding."

Aada says "I should have never offered you that antelope, oh wait, you didn't eat it."

Aabraham: "I hate anything from inside blue portals I have never heard of..."

Aada: "What?"

Mr. Gregory had already looked behind the tree, he saw the Porta-potty.

"Is this it?!"

he said and they ran to the porta-potty and Aabrahan said "Yes." he says, terrified because he knows this may be dangerous for him and his friends to go through.

Aada and the rest stare at it for ten seconds then Aada breaks the paralyzing silence.

Aada: "What's so important about this?" She says in a merely worried way.

Aabrahan goes and opens its door, it's a teleportation portal that's green in color.

Aabraham: "This is quite strange." Says in a bewildered way,

Aada: "They made THIS!? In the future?!" she says in pure shock,

Aabraham: "No, God only told me to tell you about it just to give you guys an idea of what it was, it is one, but at this time, Morning, it has the chance of turning into a teleportation portal. The rest of the time, it's a good bar that bring you cookies when you least expect it." he says in terror and pure complete shock.

Aada:

"I like this place!" She says in a worried but like "Oh my gosh, this is cool!" kind of way,

she says "Can we go in, Aabraham?"

She says in a "What do we do?" kind of way as he stares at it in shock, he says "Yes."

They step into it and teleport to the place where Zala is.

Aabraham: "So, is it like, this is where-"

"AABRAHAM?! GREG?! MY LOVE! AND AADA!" Zala calls as she runs from a hoard of angry guards and screams for her life, "HuH?" they, shocked, turn to look at her but were totally in shock at the men chasing her.

"Just run!" she says as she runs past them, they agree to do so and run at fast speeds.

"This is a very fast-paced journey!" Aabraham prays, looking up at the sky as if he's praying to God, which he is.

"Don't look behind you!" Zala says as a black giant fog forms behind them

"What's happening?!" Aada asks in fear, "They have grown so much more advanced than us!" Aabraham states in terror and fear for his life.

Aada: "Huh?"

The fog grabs Aada's leg and pulls her back, she screams as it drags her into its abyss.

"Aada!" Gregory calls as he turns to look at her, he freezes.

Aabraham: "God, please, don't let it take her, and him, they're our friends!"

He doesn't look back at all out of fear for his life.

The fog starts to take Greg as he is frozen, scaring him inside.

He tries to scream but his mouth makes no movements

"Aada!" Zala calls, "Aada!"

"I'm so scared!"

Aarbraham screams just as Aada is shot out of the fog, alive, and Gregory is let go by it and taken to them by bouncing up and onto Little Zala.

The fog tries to continue after them, but it's like an invisible force is stopping it.

They all get up and run, screaming, even the Gregory who is now mobile and can move his mouth and body.

The scene skips to 5 hours later, they are all alone, and they sitting in front of a golden teepee and a campfire they made out of golden sticks.

Aabraham: "Someone tell me how golden sticks can light a fire because I don't know." he says in a confused and scared way.

Aada: "Who cares?!" She says in an angry and scared way.

Zala: "I wish I was never his daughter!" Zala screams in terror and defeat.

"What happened back there?!" Gregory asks her in shock and terror.

Zala was silent, and Aabraham was confused, and Aada was shaking in fear.

(This goes in captions -->) An hour later,

(The rest should not be in captions)

they were all eating cooked buffalo, Mr. Gregory stated: "This is some good cooked buffalo they got here, I mean really good." Mr. Gregory was taken by the hand and told by Aabraham that "The man that took her was a warrior who fought for peace for the land of Aganoth, but they found him as he was praying to God and killed him and took her, but she escaped." he said, sad and disheartened, they all but Zala looked at him like he was crazy, she was just like "How did you know that?" which, after 5 seconds, she had asked him in pure shock.

They all turned to look at her like "The heck?!"

they never said the heck, though.

After ten seconds, He says "God told me." sad and disheartened.

After 4 more seconds, "You have to get to the castle...It's the only way to find your father, you...you must kill him. He's gone crazy, he's really gone crazy..." Aabraham says in tears at the thought that a man died, knowing he was good. He never bawled out, like verbally crying, but he was in tears.

Ten seconds later of confusion from the group,

Aabraham: "He killed him, and he was a really good man. If we don't do something, we'll die, too, what do we do, man?!"

Aada: "I'm not gonna stay here to find out, we'll find a way back to America, cuz...We're not in America! And we'll get home, and live normal lives!"

Zala: "I want to get home as fast as possible."

Mr. Gregory: "Exactly right."

Then, the thought of leaving hit her mind "But, it is selfish to leave, for me to leave, you guys go."

Aada looked at her in shock and says "Why? Whoever else will help them if that's your problem, we need to get home!"

Aabraham: "We can't just take her, she's the one to save them!"

Aada: "I don't like this, he's crazy and she is, too!"

Aabraham: "We're all crazy, willing to leave people to suffer when we can do something about it."

Zala: "He's right, I feel like...I, like, I feel like we should help." after a 22-second long pause,

"This is the worst day of my life!" Aada says in rage and goes into the golden teepee in front of them.

24 hours later... (<- That goes in captions, make them look good.)

The team goes on an adventure of sorts, this angers Aada, worries Aabraham, terrifies Mr. Gregory, and all three go for Zala's emotions.

Aada looks in Zala's direction, she's totally ticked off at her for this, even though she didn't even want to take her with her, and they only wanted to go to:

Save the people

Keep Zala safe.

They really love Zala, she should never leave Gregory.

They are walking in a big and green woods, it is beautiful, they have no idea why the wood of the trees are green, but whatever.

"Why are the trees green?" Zala asks in confusion, "Painted green." Aabraham says.

"God," Aabraham says, again.

"Is God going to keep us from getting killed? By my ideas, we are in irreversable danger, now!" Aada complains, "You've been complaining the whole time." Aabraham complains.

Aada: "I have the right reasons!" she says in anger towards them all.

She punched a tree, and then a hidden door to a portal opens.

She looks at the tree in shock, then stares at it for 19 seconds.

They walk about 40 steps forward, then they realize, Aada's not with them, so, they look at her in shock, as a bright beaming light come out of the tree's door.

"Bruh..." Says Aabraham in shock.

Then, a voice says "Ura!" which means "thank you." in Comanche.

A person steps out of the portal, which terrifies Aada into jumping 1 step backward.

It's a woman.

"Who the heck are you?!" Aada calls out to her as she walks into the forest to walk around and see the view.

"I'm TOPSANNAH." it Means "prairie flower" in Comanche

"I'm a prairie flower." TOPSANNAH states proudly and boldly, "I'm apart of a small group of people keeping the Town in check."

"You're not dangerous?"

Aada states, wearily.

"I'm dangerous to those who defy me and mess me over," Aada was starting to run away when "NOPE!" she says as she pulls Aada towards her and says "The Chief says you guys have a prairie flower, not my group, but a real prairie flower, a girl, who is she?" She tells her in a manecing tone of voice, just then, Zala hits her on the back of the head with a big heavy stick that knocks TOPSANNAH the "fluff" out.

Zala drops the stick behind her head and sighs heavily, "You never hit another tree, again!"

Zala walks off to her other friends in rage, Aada steps over TOPSANNAH and runs off to all her other friends.

After an hour, TOPSANNAH is awake, the teens are all gone, and she's alone.

"Those little brats!" TOPSANNAH screams and runs back into the green portal in the tree, then her hands pop out and start to feel for the opened door, once they get to it, they swing it closed.

Two hours later...

"It's been two hours and nothing!"

Aada says in fear.

"Why do they need you?" Aabraham says, "I think they need a new ruler." Zala says in fear.

Aada: "Will we ever see our parents, again?!"

she says in total worry.

"Yes, after I fix the problem, I'll take my mother and tell her everything." Zala states, "Then, I'll bring you guys to your families."

Mr. Gregory: "Wait, if you have to be their ruler, you'd have to stay here? That means you'll have to leave us!" he says in fear and shock.

Zala stopped, and after she did, the whole team did.

"Why?"

Aada says in sadness.

"I'll visit," Zala says.

Aabraham says "I'll help you rule if you want-"

Mr. Gregory: "I'll be her husband, I'll help her!" he says turning to look at him in fear and jealousy and anger mixed with confidence and wary-ness, too.

As Zala looks at him in love, he takes her hand in his and says "I'll be with you through it all."

Aada is 13, Aabraham is 14, like Zala, and Mr. Gregory is Aada's age.

When they got to an entrance, which was 5 hours later of walking, they started to cheer but stopped suddenly realizing this was a dangerous mission to start making a whole bunch of noise.

Aada walked up to the door first.

She touched it, it opens up by God's hand.

Aabraham says "God opened the door for us?! Cool!!" In a shocked and happy way.

"What?!" Aada says in shock and fear.

Aada walks into it, and then all of the other teens follow.

They are on another planet, This planet has four major landmasses radiating out from a spot between the equator and south pole. It has an average surface temperature of about 55° Fahrenheit. Its average temperature has been fairly stable over the last several millennia, and it experiences low levels of geological activity in a few hotspots. Easily-mined metals are found in moderate quantities over most of the land.

They are walking in a mountainous terrain strewn with huge grass. They can see a large river to the east. The temperature is very warm and the sky is clear.

Aabraham: "It's kinda on this planet."

Aada: "What?"

Aabraham: "Yeah, we aren't on earth, anymore."

The team stops walking and then slowly turn to look at him, he's like, behind them all by now.

He stops walking, and then says "Yeah, I know this is weird."

"What is even happening?" Aabraham says

Aada: "Is this real?"

she is really asking that. "I'm dreaming, right?" Zala says and Mr. Gregory says "I like this!"

Then, Little children, fairies, actually, that are African-Carribean and African looking are flying around now, they just started to pop out of the grass.

They giggle and then play around them.

The teens are shocked and flabbergasted, they are looking at them in awe.

To flabergast is to surprise (someone) greatly; astonish.

Then, adult African and African-Carribean fairy moms and dads, some coming out and holding hands while doing so, pop out of the grass and go get the small children and fly off into the sky scolding the babies and children.

"Wow!" Aada and Aabraham say to each other looking at each other.

They walk further, looking down and trying to see within the grass, moving the grass with their hands so as not to step on any fairies.

When they get to the river, they see the mermaids, all Carribean African men, and African women.

"All of them are Carribean African men and African women!" Aada shouts in shock.

"Problem?" Mr. Gregory says in defense,

Aada: "No, my dad just said that due to lack of sunlight, they'd be pale with giant pupils, and big heads, and they'd GIANTS or at least really fat!"

The mermaids say in African "What is she talking about?"

The men who can speak any language say "They are saying we are supposed to have big pupil and pale skin, and head that big and fatness or at least be VERY tall or giant-sized because we live in water." in African to the women.

The women look at each other, laugh then say in African "Silly teens."

This should be translated into captions for the viewers.

One mermaid pops up out of the water, This North Atlantic mermaid has a turquoise tail, green eyes, a tanned complexion, and curly dusty green hair left uncut. She is of average height and is fairly muscular. She wears a jeweled necklace and a flower pendant. She gets lost easily and collects shells.

"I came all the way from the comfortable North Atlantic earth to be in such warm weather," she says.

"Where am I? I should be in the third pond? Is this it? I think I got lost."

She says, "I get lost a lot."

she says to her friends to make them laugh and they do because it's true, but seriously, she's lost.

"I'm really lost, though."

She says in a little downness.

She's speaking Arabic, so the words are translated in the captions.

"I have to go to get my shell collection!" She says in anger at herself for getting lost, again!

"I have to go and get to a castle, so, yeah," Aabraham says in shock at the sight of the mermaids, they're all in shock.

The men translate his words to the women, and the women all laugh.

The teens continue to walk off.

The mermaid that gets easily lost notices that they look of young teens and asks in English, "Are you okay?"

"Yes, we are!" Aada says in shock that a mermaid asked her a question in English.

"We should get to know them when we have to go home," Aada says in joyous glee that she saw mermaids.

It was supposed to be really happening to them in the story. God told me this. I was wondering as we wrote this together.

Aada: "This is real?"

It was just so weird.

Aada looks around her surroundings, this is weirder than the time her dad "This is weirder than the time my dad gave me a good bible but said never to use until Christmas."

"Why?" Aabraham says.

"I have no idea!" Aada replies

The mermaid saw they were leaving already, so she follows them by turning her fins to legs, and then getting onto land, cover her privates with grass, and making it into clothes, and then walking after them. She looks like a native from the North Atlantic. She had a wooden bra on, too.

"While we are waling, I feel like we are being followed," Aada says.

Zala "Yeah..."

"Why do you-"

Aabraham was cut off by "Hi, Children!"

The children JUMP and turned quickly to look at her in fear.

"What are you doing here?!" Aada says, "What do you want from us?!" Zala says in defense and worry.

"Oh, I wouldn't let such young children be alone like you all." the mermaid says.

"I'm Geulia." The mermaid introduced herself as she did a curtsey.

"What is happening?" Aada asked, then she suddenly noticed "Your legs, they're legs!" Zala says aloud, Aada asks "Where is your tail?!"

"I turned my tail into legs." She says in glee.

They stare at her legs in confusion and bewilderment, then they roll their eyes and turn to walk off, after 5 seconds of walking, Zala says, "Okay, you can come."

But Zala then noticed that danger is around them, so she says "Aabraham, tell us, what does God say about her?!"

Aabraham: "She's good-like."

"Okay," The mermaid says and runs up to them.

"Why do you kids want to be here?"

she says in confusion and glee.

"We must overthrow the evil chief of the Aganoths." Aada says and then Zala turns to her in anger says "Seriously?! She's only GOOD-LIKE!"

The mermaid looks at them in shock, and says "Really?!"

"Really?! That is hard to finish, ever since he found this planet, he's been using its recourses for good and bad, he's going to protect himself!"

Aada says "Seriously? No wonder the place is so weird!"

They make it to the castle, after four days.

"This was a long trip."

Aada says.

"I know, but, hey, what is that!!!"

Zala says in joyous crazy victorious glee!

"It's a...CASTLE!!!" Gregory says in joy.

about 5 minutes later,

They hide behind bushes, just in front of the castle doors.

"You made it, Zala!"

Aada says to her in happy whispers.

"I know, right?" Zala whispers to Aada and her friends and the mermaid.

"We're only...14 to 13 years of age, can we do this?" Aabraham states in whisper worries.

"How old is the mermaid?" Aada asks intently, they all look at the mermaid.

"51." She looks like she's 18, though.

"What?!" Zala whispers.

Zala peaks out of the bush to scout out enemies.

She sees one enemy, he's in front of her but facing away from her.

She looks up at him slowly, then peaks back into the bush quickly, this makes a rustle, and then he looks around and runs off to go find the noise.

"Where did that come from?!" he says.

she whispers "Okay, we're doomed."

"We should be more careful." Geulia, the mermaid says.

Aada whispers "I have a plan, Aabraham, pray for our success." in a confident tone of whispers.

"Yes, I should do that." he says, Zala says "Geulia, go and distract the guards with your beauty."

"I will. I get so many men on a date, it's uncanny."

Geulia says in confident whispers.

Zala: "Okay, now, Aada, you go in and steal the keys, I see them in the guard over there's pocket."

Aada: "What? And I thought I had a plan!"

Zala whispers "What is it?"

Aada whispers: "Prayer."

Zala whispers "And that is good, but God wants us to have a plan."

Mr. Gregory says "I'll be back up in case one of you guys gets hurt!" in a worried tone of voice, mixed with determination.

"Good, Greg, my love!" Zala says, then gave him a kiss on the cheek.

"Thanks," Greg says in a flirtatious tone.

"You guys, go and do your things, we really need someone to distract them, first, though."

"What about you, Zala?" Geulia asks and whispers, "Okay, after you get the keys, bring them to me, Geulia, keep them distracted long enough to let us get in, Aada, you're back up in case of an emergency and one of us need help, Aabraham, start praying cuz that's the only way this plan'll work!" Zala whispers.

"Okay!" he whispers.

Aabraham starts to pray, whispering, "God, let us win this battle and Journey, please, let us stay alive and keep us from facing our deaths, In Jesus Name, Amen."

"Okay, let's move out!" Zala says in confidence.

Geulia sneaks out of the bush, behind the men, from their sights, then she starts to hide behind a tree when a man sees her and says "Hey, are you from the mermaid pond?" in a flirty way.

She turns to look at him in shock and punches him in the face out of fear screaming, the kids look at her in shock and anger.

Aabraham rolls his eyes in anger as she says "I'm sorry, are you okay?!" In a 1950s blonde hot girl kind of way.

"Begone, thot!" the guard says as he leaves the castle front at God's will, "Aabraham, that was God because he'd arrest her for that." Zala whispers, "You're right." Aabraham says.

"What's a thot?" Geulia says aloud in a confused kind of way, the other men walk towards her in droves and says "Hey, sweetcheeks."

The kids run out of the bushes, then realize "What about the keys?!" Aada whispers, "What about the plan?" Mr. Gregory whispers, "THIS IS THE PLAN." Zala whispers, They in the mermaid's direction, they whisper at the same time "She's too hot, they're too girl crazy."

"One is gonna have to go in there." Aada rolled her as she said that.

"Aada WAS supposed to get the keys," Aabraham states, much to Aada's dismay.

"Awwww, dang." Aada quietly but not whispering exclaims.

Aada goes into the 100 men bunch and grabs the keys from the man's pockets.

They have a lot of keys, so she prays "God, is this it?" in whispers. (May have to be louder than others for the audience to hear)

God: "Yes."

No one but Aada can hear him, this makes her say "Ooo!" in shock and jump.

She digs her way out of the men and says in a whisper "This was easy."

She gives the keys to Zala and Zala tries to quietly open the big doors, she opens one but the other has a keyhole too, meaning that she needs to unlock that part too, she does put the key in but realizes it won't open

"We don't need to open this one, right?"

Zala says in worry.

"You must be joking," Aabraham says in anger.

God: "This isn't a portal thing."

Aabraham: "That's all we needed, run in." he whispers louder than the other times but not too loud.

They struggle past each other and get in on time for the guards to stop flirting with Geulia, and turn to see four little feet scampering into the castle.

"Hey, those kids!" one guard yells!

"AHHHHHHHH!" Aada screams out of nowhere in terror.

"Runaway !" Aabraham screams.

"Dear God, please, SAVE US!" Mr. Gregory screams.

One of the guards not chasing them, because all of the guards are starting to go hot on their trail, stays behind to tell Geulia "My love, we will meet again, someday." then he runs off to go after the teens.

"Come on!" They say at the same time in fear, without even realizing it and not caring.

They run into the throne room, big move.

They use the keys to lock the door behind them, they didn't know what they doing, they were just running from guard possibly about to kill them.

Then... a clap is heard from the distance.

The Chief saw them..

"I can see you guy using my fairies powers, I can see all around this planet and even this castle.

When I saw you guys outside in the bushes, I knew I could trust you to screw up." The chief says.

"Oh, COME ON!" Aabraham says,

"I am the government, I have complete control." The chief says, "I am one step ahead of you."

"You aren't, your guards surely weren't!" Aabraham mocks him.

"Yeah, they've been sex-deprived for a long time." The chief says.

"You're right," Zala says.

"But, never mind that, let's get to the chase, Zala, welcome home!" The chief says, shocking Zala.

"You know me?" Zala says, "My wife who left me named you, I had no say in it." The chief tells her in anger, "I had to wait for you for 14 years! You don't know how it feels to lose your wife and kid!" he says getting angrier.

"You raped her!" Zala tells him in anger and hatred.

Mr. Gregory says to him in hatred "You don't deserve kids!"

Chief: "YOu don't know what I deserve."

He loosens up his neck and makes a whole bunch of fire fall from the sealing's picture with fire in it and the fire seems to disappear, the more fire that falls, God shield the kids with a blue ball of power from God himself.

"God is great! God is God, Man, I love my life, I don't wanna lose it!" Aabraham shouts in joy and terror.

"You should be dead!" The chief states.

"Why?!" Aabraham says, then he retorts with "You aren't!"

"Okay, I need powers!"

Zala screams, her dad uses his powers to try and burst the bubble, red beams strike the God made bubble 50 times

(not too fast, not too bright, or not bright at all because of epilepsy. No bright flashing lights.)

"Zala, God gave you powers, use them!"

Aabraham says.

"What?! Whatever, okay, adjusting to them!" Zala says in surprise.

She raises her hands, prays "Make it work and happen in Jesus' name, Amen!" them a white beam shoots out of her hands and shoots her father in the chest.

He falls back, God tells her to get his "Get his Crown!" and she is allowed out of the bubble and goes to his throne and looks around for a crown "God, why is this thing important?"

"Look at it for 1 second."

She does and her dad is taken to another dimension and as he's going he says "Nooooooo!"

Zala: "The fluff?!" Zala screams looking at her father in shock, then she screams as a slow grow bright light comes from the crown and turns her into the Princess.

"The hay?"

Her outfit is done in white, dark red, and brass. She is wearing an elegant top with a single strap sleeve and a pair of loose knee-length trousers, as well as a pair of sandals and a medium-length vest. Her accessories include a choker and a pair of bracelets.

A crown is put on her head, it is taken from her hands and lands on her head.

Zala: "Why am I wearing this, and what is happening?"

"You are the Princess, but I am King," God says in a dominant and confident way...

"Wait, are you saying that you're going to rule this peace?"

Aabraham says, "Lucky folks." Aada says in shock.

"Bright light..." Mr. Gregory says in shock.

They pay no attention to Gregory and Aada goes to Zala and say "Does this mean you'll get to stay with us?"

Mr. Gregory walks to her and holds her hands and says "I will forever be by your side, I cannot marry you right now, but I will stay near you and wait until I'm older and marry you right here, at this time."

God says to them "You will visit here, as I will have you rule, and you shall do as I ask you to do with this town and planet."

Aabraham: "You mean...she gets the whole PLANET, TOO?!" he says in shock.

God: "You have been through so much, you deserve it!" he says in sympathy and compassion.

Zala cries with tears of fear, joy, and happiness.

The mermaid comes in and says "I tricked the guards into running into the forest of butterflies and bees, are you guys okay?!"

God: "You all can take your friends and family to stay in the town and here."

he says happily.

"I can take them to be with me?!" Zala says in happiness.

"I don't want to leave my home, Zala," Aada says in worry.

"Do you have a portal nearby?" Zala asks God, he says "I have put them in the basements in your homes."

Zala is too happy, "I want to thank you for everything," she says in tears gratefully to God, these are tears of joy, and not of sadness, "And thanks for being here." she says to her friends.

"Your welcome," Aada says to Zala.

"I love you, Aada," Zala tells her.

"Let's go home, anyway back?"

Aada asks God.

"I have one in here, walk to the door on the wall."

God says to them.

They walk to it, and they open the door with ease and see their homes, inside the room is three doors, One for Aada, one for Mr. Gregory, and one for Zala.

Zala: "Where's Aabraham's door?"

Aabraham: "Yes, the orphans are waiting there for me."

The teens and mermaid besides Aabraham: "Orphans?!"

After 5 seconds of silence from Aabraham, as she is in shock for 2, then in sadness for 3.

Aabraham: "I have no parents..." Aabraham says sadly.

Zala looks at him in tears and says "Is it the orphanage near my mother's flower shop?"

"Yes." Aabraham says "I didn't want you to think lowly of me for being an Orphan." he says in sadness and near tears.

Zala: "There's nothing wrong with being an orphan, Aabraham. You are the same worth as I am."

Aabraham looks at her in sad eyes, then he hugs her.

She is in shock from it, but after 5 seconds, she slowly hugs him back.

The rest of them hug him, God hugs him in spirit, which creates a beautiful glow.

"You are my son, now," God tells Aabraham.

"Thank you, God. So much." Aabraham cries.

"Where will he live?" Aada asks, God replies "With me in the castle."

30 Angels at once: "We'll help." they sing in joy.

the teens are taken aback and stare up into the sky like "The heck!?" and the mermaid doesn't move her head and look up with her eyes.

Then, they all start to sing.

[ANGELS]

Come live with us in God's castle

There's a room waiting for you

Join us...

Join us...

Join us...

Be our son.

Come live with us, There's a room waiting for you

Join us...

Just let us raise you

God loves you so much and you're his Prophet

You love God

Do you want to live with us?

Let us raise you.

[1 ANGEL]

You look sad what do you cry for?

Jesus loves you

[ALL THE ANGELS]

Just let us love you

[AABRAHAM]

But the orphans need me,

I raise the orphans

[GOD]

I'll raise all the orphans in the town and outside, and those in the orphanage with you.

[5 ANGELS]

Come bring them to the castle

There's a room waiting for them

[GOD]

Join us

I love you much more than the woman who rules the orphanage

I have always loved you

Please, stay my son forever in heaven and beyond.

[AADA]

What about the evil guards? About the guards,

They are very evil, are you gonna deal with them?

[30 ANGELS]

God will deal with them, Promise you.

(They stop singing now)

Aabraham: "I can say, the woman at the orphanage is disdainful to us, this is what's best." he thinks for 5 seconds, "Okay, I'll stay!"

he says in joy.

He hugs the air

Aada: "What are you doing?"

Aabraham: "Hugging God, of course."

Aada: "Okay, then."

Aada walks to Zala with pride and happiness in her soul, the says

Aada: "Okay, let's go home, Zala-"

God: "You will stay here for 6 days, I will bring your parents tomorrow."

"Um, wow, I didn't expect that, okay, well, waiting for mom and dad, I'm gonna go and find a room." Zala states in a worried and thrown off kind of way but also like an "I'm okay with this in a way..." way.

Zala: "I'd love to spend six days here, but what will you tell my mother?" Zala says noticing her mom can get a little worried.

God: "I've already told your parents and orphanage leaders the news."

Aada:

"Okay then," she says casually but also shocked.

The next day.

Their parent comes through the Portal, Aada's parents are worried, Zala's mom is terrified and runs to find Zala.

Mr. Gregory's mom runs in looking for her son.

Aada steps into the room, she is dressed in a sparkly dress that looks heavily elegant for her age.

Aada looks at her mom and dad and says "Mom, pa, here I am!" in a diva way.

Zala comes out in a crown, a big crown but not too big.

She is wearing the same clothes as the day before, she didn't expect her parents to be here this soon, so, she has bed hair.

"Hey- OH MY GOSH, MY MOM, OH MY GOSH, YOUR PARENTS!" She says, realizing that her mom and other people saw her with bed hair,

when she was about to go change and do her hair, her mom runs and hugs her.

"How dare you run off without telling us?!"

Her mom scolds her.

Aada's parents are both happy and ticked at the same time.

Aabraham comes out with 60 African-Carribean, African, and white children

10 are African, 1 is white and a girl and the rest are African-Carribean.

Aada's mom runs up to her and says "How dare you run off without us? I'm glad you had courage but you were stupid!" and then she harshly pats her on the head, hard.

"Hey, mom, I saved people, give me a break," Aada says in a sassy way.

Her dad: "Let's get rid of that smart mouth."

he says sternly.

Mr. Gregory comes out with his mom pulling on his ear and says "My gosh! You left us like that! Your six sisters and 5 brothers got worried!"

"They were out working and dealing with their families!" Mr. Gregory says.

The orphans are at the food table that Aada put out for them the day before.

They are enjoying the food.

Zala's mom kisses her face over and over, again. (7 kisses)

Ethi (Her mom): "Oh my dear gosh, You dear beloved sparkle, I was so worried about you!"

Zala: "I'm sorry for leaving mom, but someone took my love and It was an accident I went in there." she says to her mom, trying to explain.

Ethi: "Oh, God told me everything!" then she continues to kiss her daughter 5 times.

Zala looks at her mother and says "I'm sorry for my step-father and my father."

"You don't have to apologize, they're actions were never your fault, my love," Ethi says to her daughter.

"Now, my love, I have to show you something special about this planet."

Ethi says to her in a whisper.

"What?" Zala says as she pulls outside and then shows her the mermaid treasure.

"How do you know about this?" Zala says.

Her mother floats up into the air and turns into a Princess with a white gown and a pretty Princess crown and a long big dress that looks pretty and laughs and then lands on the ground.

"I used to be a princess here, My mother came and met my father, who was king and adopted by fairies and took on by them to be their son. I cam when I was 18 and married your step-father when I was 19. I had to leave because of...issues with the thrown." Ethi says, "What happened?" Zala says,

"The King, a new king, took my father's thrown." Zala's mother says, "Um, well, who was the new king?" Zala asks in Shock.

"He was my father's brother, then I got word he was overthrown." Zala's mother says.

Zala is shocked and pleased as this was new info and she hopes her mother will teach her about the town and Planet.

"You can teach me about the planet!" Zala says, "Yes." Her mother says.

Ethi: "Well, let's go home, my dear."

Zala: "Yeah, I'm gonna make cheese balls and feed them to everyone."

Ethi: "You cannot cook very well, my dear." her mom says, laughing but still a little worried about this.

Zala: "I know I can do it." Zala says in confidence and they go off into the distance to go make cheese balls together and eat them.

The End...