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Reviews of Primordial Origin

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Primordial Origin

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changyumachine
changyumachineLv3changyumachine

I am a die hard fan of the writer. I have been supporting him from day one. I can tell you that hes a very good writer. When I read the other book, the pathway, I knew right then how good he is. Don't need to hear from anybody to know this one is already great

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Sacred_Saint
Sacred_SaintLv3Sacred_Saint

Five star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for the cover

Fallen_Ghost
Fallen_GhostLv3Fallen_Ghost

You have to love this author. Excellent writer. Read his books and you will see whywe are holding him in high esteem. The quality and details of his writing is second to none. You will thank me later

Holliett
HolliettLv3Holliett

The Pathway. Thats the nook that introduced me to this amazing writer. Hes very good in writing perfect english grammar and his novel is extraordinarily interesting. Youll be hooked.

Heavenly_goddess
Heavenly_goddessLv3Heavenly_goddess

Love the look of thebook. The cober is sooooo goood and the synopsis is even better. It has the potential of a classic. As a reader of this author, I cant wait to get reading this novel too.

anka_gural
anka_guralLv3anka_gural

Wow wow wow. I thoughtthe synopsis was good until I read the prologue and chapter 1. This author is good. I mean gooooooooooooooooooooooooood. I can guaranty this 100%

Tempestous_goddess
Tempestous_goddessLv3Tempestous_goddess

This novel is having a 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 from me already. I love everything about it despite its a new novel. The name, the novel cover and the synopsis attracted my attention 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

Gorgeous_Medussa
Gorgeous_MedussaLv3Gorgeous_Medussa

Awesome ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀ love ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀ it already. Great author, great writer. I recommend all his novels. You wont regret reading them

Zenocide
ZenocideLv2Zenocide

I reallllllyyyyyy like this book!!!! The plot is unique in its own way, and I can't wait for more! I hope the author keeps this up (。>οΈΏ<)_ΞΈ Good Luck!! πŸ‘

Skivenchy
SkivenchyLv2Skivenchy

If you have read the authors other book "The Pathway", you will understand why this author is so good. I cant get enough of his novels. This one too is already a fantastic novel

Sacred_Spirit
Sacred_SpiritLv10Sacred_Spirit

Fan of the author. Here to support πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hiis new novel πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Infernoangel
InfernoangelLv3Infernoangel

When its demons and the demon stuffs Im at home. Everything about them is what I love to read. I will give this owne a try to see how it goes but I love evrything about it

CoilingSnake
CoilingSnakeLv3CoilingSnake

The quality of the authors writing is very very good. The english grammar is of excellent use. I commend the author. The storyline brought me to the novel and didnt disappoint.

Windreader8675
Windreader8675Lv5Windreader8675

Asides from grammer mistakes that is noticeable yet didn't hinder the story, the rest is pretty good. The plot is very interesting and the setting are very well build, as it is apparent with all that pages dedicated into explaining about the realms and the cultivation. The story is descriptive. For the dialogue, I don't really know why but it kind of give me a Shakespeare vibe. The mother and father seems a bit stiff despite the desciptions? Perhaps it is just the dialogue and the tone of the story making me felt this way. But I do like the personality of the mother and father. Great job, and keep on improving as you work! P.S. Recommend using Grammerly to help with the spelling if you don't really have the time to edit.

Taimmh
TaimmhLv4Taimmh

To me personally, this is going in my library. The author has put a lot of thought into the original worlds of the story as well as the creatures of these worlds. The writing is very descriptive and arranged. Only in the first chapter when the author explained a lot about the worlds that I felt a little overwhelmed but slowly I got over it. The story is well developed and is worth reading. I love it. Honestly speaking, I wanted to give it a shot while it was just published but had my own story to develop for WPC at the time plus some other things. Keep up the good work author and you had gained yourself a new fan!

FairyGoddess
FairyGoddessLv3FairyGoddess

An interesting use of the deities setting and of the underworld. This is a great world building. The characters are interesting to say the least. I love the main fl. she's a good character. Love the storyline too. It got my interest. Thanks.

kameleon_skimp
kameleon_skimpLv3kameleon_skimp

I was interested in this novel when I read the reviews. To be honest, I made several attempts to start reading this novel. But I assure you, if you overcome this, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 5/5. The author has created an interesting world and characters. I advise you to get acquainted with this work.

minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3minho_Shiny

That was so interesting and I can't wait to read more. But before that I will give a quick review. The writing quality is topnotch and author did a good job in description part. The story development is also well in pace and as for grammar, I really don't have any complaints. All in all this story deserves 5 star rating and please do continue to deliver such good works dear author... I'm cheering for you.

Chainslock
ChainslockLv4Chainslock

Took me a while to review. This is a well-deserved five star. I couldn't really critique anything because 1) the writing is exceptional, and 2) the characters are dynamic; 3) the world is immersing. The concept is good also. All in all, great read. Good job, fellow author.

Adre_Haas
Adre_HaasLv2Adre_Haas

Here to support your book from the other book. Avid reader of your books. I cant get enough of them. Can you continue the trueborn novel by the way. Its a request from me to you. Thank you.