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Asides from grammer mistakes that is noticeable yet didn't hinder the story, the rest is pretty good. The plot is very interesting and the setting are very well build, as it is apparent with all that pages dedicated into explaining about the realms and the cultivation. The story is descriptive. For the dialogue, I don't really know why but it kind of give me a Shakespeare vibe. The mother and father seems a bit stiff despite the desciptions? Perhaps it is just the dialogue and the tone of the story making me felt this way. But I do like the personality of the mother and father. Great job, and keep on improving as you work! P.S. Recommend using Grammerly to help with the spelling if you don't really have the time to edit.
To me personally, this is going in my library. The author has put a lot of thought into the original worlds of the story as well as the creatures of these worlds. The writing is very descriptive and arranged. Only in the first chapter when the author explained a lot about the worlds that I felt a little overwhelmed but slowly I got over it. The story is well developed and is worth reading. I love it. Honestly speaking, I wanted to give it a shot while it was just published but had my own story to develop for WPC at the time plus some other things. Keep up the good work author and you had gained yourself a new fan!
I was interested in this novel when I read the reviews. To be honest, I made several attempts to start reading this novel. But I assure you, if you overcome this, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 5/5. The author has created an interesting world and characters. I advise you to get acquainted with this work.
That was so interesting and I can't wait to read more. But before that I will give a quick review. The writing quality is topnotch and author did a good job in description part. The story development is also well in pace and as for grammar, I really don't have any complaints. All in all this story deserves 5 star rating and please do continue to deliver such good works dear author... I'm cheering for you.