Aziss
I don't really understand. This thing is written in some kind of english language but you don't understand 9/10 of each chapter. It's really strange. I read the words and understand them but if you add the words into the sentence it just goes boof and you don't understand anymore. How did you manage that? Sorry but whatever this is, it is not a novel. Maybe it's some kind of secret message of a secret agency but it's definitely not a novel. I don't understand.
It would be good if it isn't fast paced. The story was too fast. Still good job. ββββ β β ββββββ β β βββββββββββββββ β β βββββββ β β ββββββ β β βββββββββββββββ β β βββββββ β β ββββββ β β βββββββββββββββ β β βββββββ β β ββββββ β β βββββββββββββββ β β ββββ
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