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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Author: Darkness_Enjoyer
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Qafar_Jhon
Qafar_JhonLv4

What I like about this novel is the mc's mentality he have Top G mindset. He don't let his emotional control him he thinks before he speak always be clam and collected. This is only the beginning of this novel The story pacing is good I hope I will enjoy this.

RealRomanLord
RealRomanLordLv3

Its looks very promising and I am also liking the MC. Keep up the awesome work.[img=recommend]

Otaku_Alucard_7002
Otaku_Alucard_7002Lv3

Seen this novel got to close to be dropped make me very sad especially when I remember in one year before we got two to three chapters per day, reading this was very fun, I like the mc development and the plot of this novel because it was a new and creative (not like the other novel when their mc’s got everything they want,A monotonous and repeated story) so I very sad and disappointed πŸ˜”

Wildfire_4
Wildfire_4Lv4

Good novel for time pass ,i enjoyed some parts while there were some rocky parts,it was still decent. I could write a whole review but unfortunately too lazy , so I will only ask this WHEN ARE YOU PLANNING TO UPDATE!?

Winter_5565
Winter_5565Lv2

Umm the story is good but to me it seemed as if the dialogue between the characters lacked emotion. Like I had no idea whether character were speaking in a monotone way or cheerfully. Describing their emotions would make it much better at least that's wat I think overall story not bad

Lordofkings12
Lordofkings12Lv12

This novel has a quality till now latest chapter i have not got any complaint regarding any thing in this novel , dialogue , plot , world development and character design it's good ,, after first arc is completed the novel gain fast paced so you will see the dialogue between character to be quite fast ⏩ which was written good or else i don't what would happen 🧐 ... i am just waiting for academic arc hopefully this arc will be good like the first arc where faceslapping and true villain we can see .. thanks author for your time and creativity in this novel hope you will continue writing in future πŸ™.

unknown_person_0905
unknown_person_0905Lv4

amazing novel I really enjoy it I hope he gets back at everyone who has wrong him in the future just wish Author stop using the word Albeit so frequently tho

iTride
iTrideLv5

Good :) ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

therealet
therealetLv3

WQ: 4* There are very noticeable grammatical errors throughout the story, but they aren't egregious, nor do they ruin your immersion so it's passable. The author does a good job at describing things for the readers through the story which gets a huge applause from me. Stability of Updates: 4* Not the best, around twice a week, but from the last chapter it seems it might pick up in speed. Story Development: 4* A little, if not, very slow, it gets a pass since the story is still in the 'info dump' stage, but I am hoping it picks up in pace later on in the plot. Character Design: 5* MC is very interesting, I like his motives, I also like that he doesn't wear his heart on his sleeve, though I will say I don't really like how he has mentioned that he wants to make the enemy girls his 'dogs' but this is a villain story so what can ya do. You get a lot of insight into how the side characters think and feel which I really like, because it makes it so the story doesn't just feel like a one-man show. The villains are kind of basic in personality, or just in general aren't really fleshed out but this gets a pass from me since they aren't really prevalent in the story. (FYI I consider his stepmother and half-sister not to be villains but rather side characters despite how the story portrays them) World Background: 4* I struggle to explain my thoughts on WBG in reviews typically, but I'll try my best here. The world building is good don't get me wrong, but it just feels sort of random, like the author picked out info out of a hat and inserted in his story. It all functions together well but nevertheless the feeling is there. tl;dr: read it it's good.

My_Penguin
My_PenguinLv2

The best novel I've read of this kind so far..I hope you keep downloading faster .................................................................. . .

Dream_Seeker_729
Dream_Seeker_729Lv14

Looking forward to it...................

Oldlearner
OldlearnerLv12

Author please why did you abandon this novel for the other one

Otaku_Alucard_7002
Otaku_Alucard_7002Lv3

I hope this novel is not to be dropped (reading this was good, but the chapters from the supposed MC’s view point were nerve-promising) any way I really hope that this novel will continue

Sorin_8377
Sorin_8377Lv3

Hey. Author San. When will the update come?

Darknessmaster123
Darknessmaster123Lv4

so the book has been dropped huh ...one of favs

indian_otaku_anime
indian_otaku_animeLv1

I thing this has some mistake but if you have time to read novel so I recommend you for this novel. it really is enjoyable . you don't feel bored or anything so get it a try you don't regret it.

Danish_Shaikh_4483
Danish_Shaikh_4483Lv2

It is a good novel.It has a good storyline.Character design is also very good.

Sahin_Ahmed_5099
Sahin_Ahmed_5099Lv13

It is a nice novel to read.There are many good points you can find in other review's. I will like to point out some problems...I think the pace is the story is little slow.There is too much monologues of different characters.I understand that character development is important but rather than telling us about it through their monologue you can actually show us their progress by their action. I am giving this review after reading till 315,so you can rest assure I have given it ample time and the flaw I have pointed out is what I feel.

SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv3

I loved the first 50 chapters of the novel since it was entertaining. even after that the pacing was good but once academy arc started, the plot went all over the place. the R 18 feels also more like filler, pretty soulless if you ask me. The author seems to treat this more as an experiment than actually giving it some time and thought. You think otherwise? Bro had some chapters with half the content being characters speaking their chants... The premise of the story is good but quality immensely drops.

TSareyouthere
TSareyouthereLv14

When you first take notice of this novel, based on the title and general trends you would expect this novel to be some kind of complete eroge BUT I was pleasantly surprised with this story, very balanced we can enjoy the MC getting stronger as well as some Rare intimate scene ( that you can skip as they have generally en entire chapter dedicated which is Genius), I can ony say that where I am, Chatpter 111, I do enjoy the novel !