Reviews of Enrolled In A Magical Academy
Enrolled In A Magical Academy
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The story is really my type I don't know if it's just me but I like for MC to suffer first then slowly went through a change like training then if he thought his strong enough crushhh him again make him sufferr hahahahhah.This is only my thoughts shouting, a humble opinion teheeđ.. I can see some potential on your story author.
Everything about this story is intriguing and suspenseful. I like the character development and the side characters arent overly shallow. Overall, this would be a good story if you just fixed one major issue. Sentence structure and proper grammar! I can't fault the author too harshly, since I can obviously tell they don't speak english as a first language. Just read more english stories (proper ones, not web novels) to get a better feel for sentence structure and flow. Then read your own work to revise. You should be able to hear the difference. . This is meant as constructive criticism. Thank you for the work you put in.
