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There are only five chapters so far but they’re entertaining. The author wants to create a flow similar to k-dramas. I’m not an expert on K-Dramas but I can say it does remind me of the few episodes I’ve watched. There is dramatic humor and a good amount of foreshadowing that makes you want to know what’s next. I would say if you’re looking for something that is different from the typical face smacking and want a change from the abusive CEO stories here, this is a good fit for you.

Shaping to be fine romantic comedy for the business ***** love genre. Fast paced and easy to read. I am waiting for more.. I am waiting for more.. I am waiting for more.

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The story is getting better and better. The story line is getting better and better. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the story is worth reading.

Reading this book (believe it or not) was a new experience for me. I hadn't read this kind of thing before. Well, I liked it. It was something unique and I definitely am glad that I agreed to swap with you, author! The two main characters are good and their dynamics are fun to read. Aside from that, there is a decent amount of humor that kept me entertained throughout the story. If this is type of book you like, then you should probably check it. If this is not the type of book you like, well then maybe like me, you might still end up liking it so do check it out. ^^ Good work, author!

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Does anyone know what happened to the author? I was actually invested into the story more than most others, I hope the author didn't drop the this. :(

I just started reading this book and it going great so far and I would like to read more of this novel so more updates more updates please it a really interesting novel.

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i didn't know that it's new hahaha so i was expecting for more updates but then here i am typing a review. So far so good, i like it. i have been reading recently many kinds of this so i can say that it's quite unique. hahhahahahaha i dont know what to say na.

Wow! There are only 5 chapters, but so much has happened. The story is developing very well. Also, every single character introduced so far has a distinct personality. Ryujin, Aera, Jaein. I can already tell the type of character they are despite so little interactions, which is amazing. With so few chapters, the world has not been fully explained yet, but there are details added in such as good looks and enrollment in a prestigious university being valued. The only thing I could criticize would be the grammar. Some of the sentences don't mix well, and there are a few misplaced words here and there. However, if you fix that, I believe the story has no issues. It has good characters and solid plot development!

I came across this novel due to Han Minhyun and Lee Soohyun. Haha oh well, three chapters and I am looking forward for more. Kudos to you Author-nim. 😊

It's really good story. There has only been 7 chapters updated so far so I can't tell much. But I like the plot so far. I can tell where the author is trying to take this so I'm sure the chapters ahead will be fun to read.

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K-dramaesque and somewhat cliche, but a promising one, at least. We can't really connect with any of the characters in the first chapters, but it has room to improve. Cannot say anything regard quality of writing, it's all the same to me.

This story has vibrant characters who are easy for the reader to relate to. The lollipop is a cute quirk. You also do an excellent job utilizing a wide variety of words.

So, this is my review for this story! :) The story is good, despite the lack of chapters. The plot is kind of cliche, but the way it was portrayed in the story was interesting. Some scenes in there made me laugh a few times. The author has this interesting approach to writing a story that it won't make the reader feel like they are reading a novel, but watching a Korean drama instead. It's fun and entertaining. It's also easy to read. But, it has its flaws, such as errors in grammars and the repetitive use of the same word to define of what the author wants to be portrayed in the story. Nothing major. The flaws can be easily fixed if the author works better in improving their knowledge in English. I highly recommend for the author to read lots of books, some dictionaries and a thesaurus to become more well-versed in the language in question. Other than that, it's a good read. It's fun and entertaining. Definitely a recommend to people that are looking for something entertaining. So, I'm giving this story a 4.2/5. I like the male lead. He was funny. The cover art for this story is good too, so that's a plus for me. 이 이야기를 완성 할 수있는 최고의 행운을 기원하며 즐거운 하루 보내세요! (^_^)

Hard to type a full review when the chapters are too few. I've read many CEO girl mc many, many times and Korean names are hard to memorize, I said to myself 'ah here we go again in the CEO thing.' Boringly. But when I read this book it was an eye-catcher from the start like the girl mc that was failed into the interview many times, its normal matter for me. In chapter 2, it was fascinating that the ml CEO was a gamer (like me) but not bcs of he is a gamer I was intrigued, its bcs he was not a sadistic (err. I'm gonna throw up rainbows for that) or a villain like. Meaning his character gamer but a CEO is new for me. In chapter 3 still interesting and funny how the reporter and secretary embarrassing moment xD. Notes: there are some errors in the chapters, the detailed of the characters. And the other question of mine will reveal in the next following update. Like I said it's hard to give a full review so this is my review for now. ^^

With only three chapters, it's hard to make a full review. But so far, the writing style is okay. There were just spelling errors at the latter part of Chapter 3.